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Dom,
I was imagining this as a rap, hearing "Ice-T" in my head. Sings great that way. Kinda anthemic.
Then like Guess Who's song "Laughing" --more a ballad, and it works that way too.
Overall, I like it. "left for dead, left unsaid, unlike fermenting wine/been losing favor all the time" slowed me down a bit--I was trying to figure out a way to simplify that thought, to no avail.
Mike
Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 09/01/23 04:28 PM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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