As Vic stated, a couple of ideas were used from a lyric that was aborted.
The story isn't complicated.
The comment from Steve pointing out that previous isn't used in the states is a valid point if Vic's song was aimed at a US market.
The song to my ears is probably more an English/ Gaelic folk song.
Couch' assumption that the "previous" line doesn't make any sense and You can't end a statement with previous" begs the question, why not?
Previous is a term widely used by the police here meaning other convictions, a police record etc
The song is a dirge, that's fine I don't mind that, I like it.
Good luck with it Vic


Last edited by Travis david; 06/30/20 02:28 AM.

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