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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Sep 2007
Posts: 844 Likes: 1
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Hey all,
I did a read through quick and then listened...and something stood out to me very quickly in the LYRIC (sorry Travis LOL)
The jury were swayed by my previous
and I sure was no angel before
The motive they claimed was insurance
but I don't give a damn anymore
Here in the States previous would never be used to soley describe someone in this situation, it would almost always be "priors"....You could say "previous transgressions", or "previous record"...But standing alone, at least here in the USA, no one would ever use "previous" in this way...It will mess up your insurance line, but maybe you can put insurance at the beginning of line & get a different rhyme?
3 options would be:
1. "by my priors", 2. "by my record"...3. "by my rap sheet"
Just a thought
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