IronKnee,

Always love your stuff . . . this being no exception. Great vocal and the acoustic guitar resonates. I think, too, Steve has some points worth considering--though I more often than not always have some variation in my chorus--it really depends on the song and whether there's an opportunity to add something and, as you say, keep it fresh. I'd be tempted as well to swap out the whistling for maybe an acoustic lead. And Travis has the right of it too . . . a very Beatlesque feel to this one. Good tune . . . with some tweaking on the edges it would really pop!

Regards,

Deej