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Hello. My name is David. I just joined this site, and this is my first post here. I'm hoping to share a few songs, get some critique and respond to tunes that others post. I've been writing songs for quite a few years. This first one that I'm posting is of relatively recent vintage. Loosely, it's about the small town in northcentral Pennsylvania where I was born and raised and, after living in a half-dozen different cities during the last 30 years or so, where I now reside once again. The song is called "This Town," and I'd be glad to hear anything anyone might have to say about it. Thanks. https://soundcloud.com/david-pulizzi/this-town-1 This Town There’s not much fun in this town Unless you’re drunk or high But you’re bound by blood to this town Until the day you die And even then the sidewalks call to you And your bones stir where they’re laying when they do There’s not much talk in this town About books and love and art So you lose your hope in this town And then you lose your heart And the world rolls by like there’s nothing here to see The world rolls by and it just lets us be And time … just passes by There’s a pretty girl in this town I keep my eye upon We were married once in this town And we had ourselves a son And he’d dream at night of the lovely things you’d do And stir where he lay sleeping next to you We fell apart in this town Lost the fire down below Where love goes in this town No one seems to know It just disappears and leaves you feeling low Like someone turned the light off in your soul And time … just passes by The years roll by in this town And nothing seems to change If you live for long in this town That don’t seem so strange And if you wonder if I ever come unglued I tell you now for certain that I do We’ve served our time in this town We’ve no cause for complaint We’ve had tough luck in this town And good luck just the same Now we stumble down dark streets once paved in gold And we wonder how and when we grew so old Well, time … just passed us by There’s not much fun in this town Unless you’re drunk or high The world rolls right past this town The world rolls right on by Right on by … ©2019 David Pulizzi All rights reserved
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