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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 1,419 Likes: 4
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Lane, Gavin and Travis,
Really kind of you to listen in and comment. It means a lot, so thank you.
Gavin, interesting take on the word "misery". I get what you're saying and agree it's somewhat less specific--and, yeah, you nailed the teenage version of the word--funny stuff. :-) I'll think about whether I can switch it out, but to me the internal rhyme is pretty key. I depart from it in the third verse, but not sure I can in the second. That said, I don't think I'll every use the word "misery" in any other song I write--at least not without thinking of you. Thanks so much for the feedback.
Regards to you all,
Deej
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