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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Aug 2007
Posts: 7,230 Likes: 87
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DJ
I like the way that you write and the way that you sound.
Suggestions...
I would manage that pleading emphasis more, where you run up your voice. And not use it quite as much. I know that it feels good and sounds good, but using it a lot imo robs the song of one or two or three good climactic points.
The guitar rhythm is somewhat of an uneven trickle and at times I think that it drags on the vocal melody. Some "rakes" might smooth that out and make the song a little richer.
Hope any of that helps. Like the tune.
Martin
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