Hey All,

Am trying to write a logline for a film project which after 5 yrs is finally gaining some momentum. So here goes....

Timid and self doubting, Toni Wheeler has left her small home town to persue a career in finance in The City in order to fund her dreams as a singer songriter, a place where her soul belongs. Dave Hollinger, the mailboy, also has the same dream. As their mutual love of music and of each other grows and veers headlong into personal tragedy, Toni must revisit her troubled emotional past in order to redefine herself and redefine the real meaning of success.

I know it's too long, but any and allthoughts appreciated. Does it make you want to read further ?

cheers, niteshift

PS - it has a very happy ending. smile