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JOHN--

IN MY LATER YEARS, I NEED ALL THE BREATHING PRIVILEGES I CAN GET--I'M USING BREATHING STRIPS--

IN THIS ONE, SOUNDS LIKE A HAUNTED HOUSE, WHERE THE POOR SOUL IS THINKING OF HIS LAST BREATH--WHILE THE GHOSTS ARE STILL BREATHING RIGHT ALONG TO THE END!

WRITE ON--

Mackie

John, you da man! Glad I listened to it in the daytime. Had I listened late last night with a belly full of my favorite adult beverage I’d been scared to death. Just very cool!

Hey there John....I usually don't download people's music (for the fear of virus) but you have always been generous in your crits to me.....so here I go..............

An instrumental...eh? Well, it's T.V quality.
I felt the 9 year old, in me, pull the pillow closer to shield myself from what is inevitably going to burst out and leap into my lap!!

Really, really artistically sound!! Great imigary.

Now, the only thing needed is a "Soundclick" account! ;-) -Tom

John,

Spookylicious....LOL! I LIKED it, not LOVE because I scare easily, but I am sure this is hitting the mark...

Tammy

Thanks Mackie! I'm always interested in the listeners scenarios. Yours was on the mark.

Do those strips really work? I was diagnosed with Sleep Apnea several years ago. Woke up with headaches almost every morning. After I lost 45 lbs two years ago the middle-of-the-night gasping stopped and the headaches stopped. Always figured I wasn't getting enough air to my brain (Sandra thought the same thing LOL ). The strips may have helped back then. Anyway, the weight lost performed miracles on my condition.

Best, John

Thank you Iggy! Always happy when the listeners are creeped-out by my music.

Best, John

Thanks Tom! I do have a Broadjam "free" account. I usually post my music there as well.

Best, John

Thanks Tammy! Scary music is great for cuddling with your guy.

Best, John

JOHN--

THE STRIPS HELP ME--I HAVE LOST 30 LBS--MAYBE A FEW MORE AND I WON'T NEED THEM!

Mackie

Great sound John, I would think someone could use this somewhere. Find out what the next cinema series productions are being considered for a run over the next few years--if you could get in and pitch your stuff early on--who knows--it could be another Harry Potter thing in the works!

steady-eddie.

Thanks Eddie! I'd take it!

Best, John

Hope the weight loss does the trick for you Mackie! I also do a lot of walking (moderate speed).

John

Excellent work John.
It has a real dramatic vibe / flow to it.

Nice mix and piano work.

Thank you Nelson! I appreciate it.

Best, John

This would make a great title to a new cinema production! I can see it on the marquee now--"Breathing Privleges Denied" -- a court room drama. Get with a screenplay writer, your music could be dynomite for every scene. You can tell that I've been in sales and marketing most of my life--get excited about ideas one day, then on to a new one the next. You-d-man!

steady-eddie.

Thanks Eddie! Maybe some writer will see this and run with the title. I Google but didn't find this title. Hard to believe it hasn't been used. But then there are just so many people with warped minds.

I was thinking on the lines of a serial killer that denies his victims breathing privileges.

Best, John