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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=822244out of the past...revised tracks. Unselfishly With Love Neil Cotton 2003 The first time I saw Stanley he cooled off with a jar With his guide dog Randy in our local bar I marveled at the teamwork of these special friends One with vision the other loving him. Friends doing deeds For friends with needs Unselfishly with love It was 2 years later when I next saw Stan No sign of his partner, he had a lady friend Randy’s guide-dog nature had led Stan right to Jane This best friend knew it was time for change Friends doing deeds For friends with needs Unselfishly with love Canine cataracts had clouded Randy’s eyes Time to retire cause the blind can’t lead the blind Friends doing deeds For friends with needs Unselfishly with love Now there are three Friends sharing needs Unselfishly with love Unselfishly with love Unselfishly with love
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Neil,
I listened to this one over at songwriter. I continued to think about it so decided to give it a second listen.
Jim
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Thanks for taking the extra listen.
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Hey Neil, Enjoyed the story! Tweaks below, keep or sweep  It was 2 years later when I next saw Stan againNo four-legged partner, he had a lady friend Randy’s guide-dog nature had led Stan right to Jane His best friend knew it was time for change
“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard
Co-writing = Compromise!
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Thanks RSV ;-) Those suggestions work. I'll write those down.
Hey 2 in the final four of basketball...Kentucky is the BB center of the world.
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 03/26/12 01:38 AM.
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