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When Love Goes....It Knows No Seasons.
(* music written and due up soon.)
Tonight I was watching the snow fall looking much like that night when you left across blankets of white while I slept, rising to a cold dawn... where my love had moved on and making coffee for one while I wept.
I remember your bootprints led out to the road then they just dissappeared by the curb, never letting me know, never dreaming you'd go, leaving me in my bed undisturbed.
Chorus-
When love goes....... it knows no seasons, Like the snowfakes it just melts away, It's a rose bent with frost, where the blossom is lost, but it's thorns will haunt you every day.
Spring wasn't much better, it was warmer and wetter, filled with lovely greens that matched your eyes. all around me bright colors, benches holding young lovers, on my walks where I once shared your sighs.
and my summer vacation was a pained re-creation of the places we cherished the most, every blond in the distance, brought back my sad existence as a man still in love with a ghost.
Then when Autumn came round with bright leaves tumbling down, I knew soon I would face misery, because a Winter was due that would be oh so, blue on my saddest of anniversaries.
Chorus-
When love goes....... it knows no seasons, Like the snowfakes it just melts away, It's the frost on a rose where the blossom is lost, but it comes back to haunt every day.
ArtWhimsically Yours Studio MFB III Productions
Hey I'm an artist...and they have a color text box on here that never gets any use...so I guess I'll play with it...LOL
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Hey MFB...
Nice write...looking forward to the music.
Some nice imagery and a touching lament.
The color effect wheel was cool also...lol.
Larry
Can't find the stairway to 'heaven'...but I know where the elevator is.
Each of us has cause to think with deep gratitude of those who have lighted the flame within us" - Albert Schweitzer.
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Hi MFB, This is very colorful, lol! Sorry I couldn't resist that. I'm going to try my hand at writing in color. Nice lyric as always. Dottie
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Hey MFB.
I like the lyrics to the song.
Was it a typo or intentional that you changed the choruses slightly in the song?
"When love goes....... it knows no seasons, Like the snowfakes it just melts away, It's a rose bent with frost, where the blossom is lost, but it's thorns will haunt you every day."
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"When love goes....... it knows no seasons, Like the snowfakes it just melts away, It's the frost on a rose where the blossom is lost, but it comes back to haunt every day."
Carlos Tabora Songwriter/Pianist
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Hey In2piano, Dottie And Carlos. I have posted this with music on the MR3 forum if you want ot hear it. Carlos i had two versions of the last line of the chorus and forgot to take one out...it's fixed now. Thanks for the bumps, the reads and the visit.~~~MFB III
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