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Hi friends. This is my latest demo and I really do love it.

Of course I would anyway.

I do hope that you enjoy it.

God Bless Roy and Helen


soundclick
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9676383

youtube: Just with lyrics
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8wsKcP9J7Cg


‘Where The Devil Lurked' Roy Cooper © 2010

Hearing their fearful cries
He paid them no heed
Gave them water once a day
And Fed them cattle feed.
He lived a life of evil
Would fight, swear and curse
Condoned un-holy suffering
For gold in his bulging purse

Chorus1
Toiling where the devil lurked
Surrounded by despair
He didn’t think too much of God
No, he really didn't care

Sailed across the oceans
To deliver those wretched souls
Forced to lie beneath the deck
In waist high dingy holds
He was captain of a slave ship
Making profits was his curse
Hearing that slaves were dying
He’d clutch his shrinking purse

Chorus1
Toiling where the devil lurked
Surrounded by despair
He didn’t think too much of God
No, he really didn't care

Then one day a raging storm
Took hold to sink his ship
Could hear that awful wailing
From deep down in midships
He cried out for God’s mercy
Please hear my pitiful call
Screamed out for redemption
Pleaded, I beg you save us all

Chorus2
Toiling where the devil lurked
He was delivered from despair
Swore to God he would atone
For the life that brought him there

Twas that day,God changed his life
He went on to become ordained
Tried to shake the memories
But still his guilt remained
So he turned to writing hymns
Putting heart felt words to verse
Thanking God for saving him
When he was at his worst

Tag:
It was said that when he died, he prayed for Gods embrace
Leaving us his legacy - the hymn – ‘Amazing Grace’

"John Newton" - captain - poet - clergyman. Born 1725 Died 1807"

Well, Roy:
This is really beautifully done. I'll throw only one nit at you (but it proves I listened carefully to the lyrics): I would change "pitiful call" to "plaintive call".
This was downright poetic. Wonderful, it moved me.
Ott

I think I commented on the lyrics for this one. Nice demo. Not the kind of music that I listen to much, but I think the demo guys did a good job for you.

Kevin

Hi Roy ,

This turned out so good, beautiful song, lyrics and the singer fit the song great...well done...

Echo the sentiments above- I really enjoyed this. Very well written, composed, and arranged. The singer did an excellent job, and the production is nearly flawless in my opinion.

You asked for comment on genre- I would call this contemporary Christian, and could hear it on contemporary Christian radio for sure.

Wow. What a Beautiful Demo..& a Beautiful SONG, Brother Roy!

I agree.."Contemporary Christian"...and this is Very Inspirational, especially since it's a True Story.

Been through an Experience like The Cap'n's...tho no slaves were killed in the process. Always wondered whether God does a "Coin-Toss" prior to that Great "Thumbs-Up!"...

But, yeah, those little Personal Miracles sure DO make ya a Firm Believer. &..perhaps a songwriter, too, eh?

Fine, Fine Job, Amigo! "KUDOS" from The Sunshine State!
Best Wishes, Good Luck with it, & Big Hugs to You & Helen,
Stan

Hello there, Roy (and Helen). Mi oh my oh, what a fine song your great lyric turned out to be. I will repeat here what I told you in an earlier PM: This is a remarkable lyric that touched me. I have heard Newton's story before but never in such a poignant and powerful way.... I actually thought the lyric was so fine as a poem that I wondered if music would do it justice. Now I can say I'm so happy that it did!

Agree with the others that it's CCM. Here's hoping it finds a home on a CCM station near me soon.... Just a wonderful song, well done.
Best,
Scott

Hi Roy,

Good lyrics and music is put together very well.
Who's the singer ?

Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

Great demo really enjoyed it. The arrangement is spot on !

Roy,

A very effective delivery of the lyric and story, you must be very happy with this, it is very good!!

Tammy

Hi Roy

Very successful sounding demo -- I like the choral entry and Amazing Grace rise....good effects there - Guy has a very nice voice. best wishes - jm

Hey Roy,

Yeah, that's one well produced demo.

It's done in that older classic style, but suits the song well. For some strange reason, I'm thinking it should be part of a Carols by Candlelight night. It has that epic feel to it.

cheers, niteshift

Ott:

Thanks so much for stopping by and having a listen. I am so glad the song moved you. That means that if I was in a competition, I would have got through to the next level lol.

I have noted your alternative word for future ref.

Thanks again

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Kevin:

Thanks friend for the thumbs up. Your contributions are always appreciated.

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Glynda:

Thanks for the lovely comments. They are appreciated. I am always pleased to pass the Glynda test..lol

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Jeff:

Thanks for having a listen. Nearly flawless is great for me lol.

Thanks again.

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Stan:

I am so glad that you came back for a listen.
I am pleased that the music worked for you because I know you loved the lyrics.

Thanks again.

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Scott:

Wow. I can see that you loved the song and was moved. That means so much to me as a writer.
I will work to try to get it on radio somewhere.
If you want a copy just ask and I will email you an mp3.

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Calvin:

Thanks for stopping over. I am pleased that you like it.
The singer is a Nashville session singer. He really don’t it justice.

His name is Mike Lusk and he works a few studios I believe.

Thanks again

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Andy:

I really love your musical skills so for you to say that the arrangement is spot on really pleased me.

Thanks for having a listen.

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Tammy:

Thanks for your lovely comments. Yes I am 150% pleased with this one.

Thanks for stopping over.

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Thanks and God Bless to all

Roy and Helen

Joice:

Thanks for coming back to hear the finished song.

I’m pleased you like it. I agree with your sentiments.

Niteshift:

Epic feel. Ummm… that goes with my frame size.. lol

Thanks for having a listen and glad you liked the demo.

God Bless to all

Roy and Helen

hOWDY HOMER. Dang dude, what a nice delight to find on my return.

Finally got some sidejobs & gathered enough bucks to get the
internet turned back on...YAY!!! Sorry for the disappearing act,
but but I had no way to let folks know. We'll Yak soon, Gus

Beautiful ...


I loved it. Wonderful message about John Newton .. you really brought it home and made it real. Music is excellent .. as are the vocals.

Great job Roy!

So pleased to see you back Gus.

Glad you liked the final. Those demo boys did me proud.

talk soon

God Bless Roy and Helen

papaG:

Thanks for stopping over for a listen.

I am so pleased that my song got the thumbs up for you.

When someone says beautiful, then it makes all the effort worthwhile.

thanks again and God Bless

Roy and Helen

Homer, I'll give this another run so everybody can enjoy it!..Gus

Thanks Gus for the bump.

Much appreciated.

Here is a reply and crafty bump back lol

I think I have some great comments and am happy with that.

God Bless Roy and Helen

An Amazing song done with so much grace, and now I know the rest of the story, this is MFB III ....Goodnight! I really like this one, it should do well in several markets and venues. ~~~MFB III

MFB III

I am so pleased that you likes the song.

Goodnight friend

God Bless Roy and Helen

Hi Roy, I love this song more every time I listen to it...so BUMP.

Cheers!
Scott