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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Lamb.wavv
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/05/26 04:07 PM
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Whole
Quiet shadows beckon
A gentle breeze invites
I need to feel you closer
and share in love’s delights
Hiding in our own world
away from stress and fear
I gaze upon my true love
and reach to pull you near
Whispers in the darkness
Soft-spoken words of love
Slow kisses filled with longing
and starlight up above
Just the night between us
Fiery sparks ignite
Memorizing you again
through touch as well as sight
Arms that are my harbor
Eyes that see my soul
A heart I give my trust to
and you who makes me whole
Jennifer (Jinx) Shaner
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Jennifer,
Someday... I hope someone will feel that way about me. Just beautiful. Good job!
Wisdom is not in words; wisdom is the meaning in words
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed. I too wish that for you.:)
Jennifer (Jinx) Shaner
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I'm kinda new here at JPF so I am enjoying the lyrics section because it all starts with a great write (and I do a lot of melody for folks). I think we all "see" pieces in different perspectives and that's alright. I also believe we all have our own internal metre goin on and when you see a piece that you can "dance" with, it's really very, very nice, just like this work is for me. This piece fits my afformentioned metre well !! You certainly have a wonderful penchant for saying so much with so few words. I would love to see a chorus of some kind but that would not be difficult. Just really like this !!
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JINX--
Very PRETTY--
Only thing:
Just the night between us
SMOLDERIN' COALS ignite
Memorizing you again
THEN BOTH OF US sigh
WRITE ON--
Mackie
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What a great poem, as is.
Thank you for sharing it here.
May your wishes come true.
I can tell you what I am not
I just can't tell you what I am
I am just slippin' down this road
no longer with any plan
stoney rohde
by stoney rohde
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Jennifer,
It is perfect! I love it!!
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There is a peace and tranquility to this. Well done.
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