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ASCAP & AI
by John Lawrence Schick - 06/26/26 05:46 PM
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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Good morning Louis This is just beautiful, you have a lovely vocal, and you have done great with the lyrics, well done hey.  I'm going to listen to it again, that's how much I've enjoyed listening. Thanks!  Aussie fan Michele
Last edited by Michele Bolton; 05/11/09 10:17 PM.
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Thanks Michele, it's night time here
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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This is very lovely Louis,you have a very nice singing voice.It's soft and meek and I feel thats what seems to draw me to all of your songs.It makes your songs seem very heartfelt and real.
*****You know I'm a dreamer,but my heart's of gold*****Motley Crue
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I must have missed this one - I know the melody is new but I still don't remember it. In any case, the melody is a good one and the lyric works too. Nice positive song.... Scott
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Thanks Michelle, hey we got two Michelle's Scott, I must've changed it so much you couldn't recognize it, lol.
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Darnit Louis. How do you keep coming up with these sweet, charming and heartfelt songs? They must come in your sleep or something while the rest or at least I, myself, struggle against the blank page of death, trying desparately to come up with something new. You amaze me.
Steve
I'm the only person here who is not unique.
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Thanks Steve, nope I'm always wide awake, lol..
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Hi Louis,
I like the nuance of "if only", since it's more a song about the "possibiities" of what faith can bring the singer, rather than him shoving dogma down my throat (ouch...if you've ever choked on dogma, you know what I'm talkin' about, lol!)
It's all sounding good to me Louis, I like it!
Mike
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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Thanks Mike, yep know what you mean. I used to be like that, then I took off my coat of pride
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Hi Louis, Good thing you live in the south. You'd get cold up nort without your coat! You're sounding fine on this one, upbeat and positive but in a good way. Melody works well with your lyrics too. Ricki
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Thanks Ricki, may need to dig out my raincoat.. raining again.. but I promise, no rain songs, lol..
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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another lovely tune louis.
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Hi Louis,
Yes, you did fine, lol. It sounds beautiful.
Letha
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Louis,
You are perpetual source of origanl talent. What a wonderful song amd performance. As always, very well done.
Alan
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Thank You Babette Letha Al, thanks man
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Louis, you're a great writer Louis...enjoyed the listen, always fresh, always delivered from the heart...thanks for sharing it with us...moker
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Louis,
This is like the classic Gospel tunes from way back: "His Eye Is on the Sparrow" and all the rest that we Southerners have heard from birth. And the strength of your song, as I see it, is in the simple way that you distill a fundamental aspect of theology and make it personal. As a listener, I can identify with the song. That's important.
Jonathan
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Hey thanks Moker... Keep Writing Jonathan, nice to meet you and thanks for listening and your comments
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Hi Louis
I DO feel that you enhanced the melody - nice work - jm
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Hey thanks Joice, yeah the other melody was kindof slow and draggy.
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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