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The goal of our "Song Challenges" is to write songs/lyrics on demand within set parameters. We don't critique each other's songs in this thread (but you can say you like someone's song if you want to.) Please post your original works. If you have already written a song/lyric that fits within the parameters, please feel free to post it.

The new challenge is to write a song with "It's only a matter of time … " as the hook. The hook can be in the chorus or as a repeated line in each of the verses. You may also change the tense if you like.

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Hi Jean, I knew it was just "a matter of time" before we would have another challenge from you. Thank you! smile

“It’s Only a Matter of Time”
©2008 Lynn Orloff

We had it all, we had everything,
Each day we spent together seemed a perfect endless spring,
But then another came your way pretending to be kind,
She took your heart, she took your love, when once it had been mine.

But it’s only a matter of time,
Before you’ll start to see,
That she’ll just break your heart in two,
And bring you to your knees.
It’s only a matter of time,
Before you'll realize,
That she’ll just play you for a fool,
It’s just a matter of time.


We had it all, the world was on a string,
Like some enchanting fairy tale we played the queen and king,
But you let in a stranger and she spun her magic spell,
She knew what she was doing and she did it rather well.

But it’s only a matter of time,
Before you’ll start to see,
That she’ll just break your heart in two,
And bring you to your knees.
Yes, it's only a matter of time,
Before you'll realize,
That she’ll just play you for a fool,
It’s just a matter of time.

It’s just a matter of time,
Before you’ll call my name,
But I’ll be far from where you are,
You’ll have yourself to blame.



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HIDee Mz Jeannie B!

Great Challenge...here's my "Quickie" on it:

Before You Were Born, You were "Non-Existing"
Then You Started Rumblin', You Started Kicking
With Luck, You Got Pushed through a 6-Inch Hole
& You Grew Up with Aspiration & Goals

(CHORUS)
'Cuz IT'S ONLY A MATTER OF TIME
You'll Climb All The Steps You Can Climb
IT'S ONLY A MATTER OF TIME
You'll Be Looking Behind!

You Learned How-to-Walk, Learned How To Tinkle
(Later Ya Learned about Simon-&-Garfinkle)
Learned How-to-Read; Learned How-to-Spell
Even Learned SOME Math was harder-than-Hell!

(REPEAT CHORUS)(With "And" in place of "'Cuz")

Well, You Learned About Radio &...TV
Learned Real-Fast About Birdies-&-Bees
Learned a Good Job & 'Bout Fallin'-in-Love
(Learned "Bein' JUST-Friends" WASN'T Good-Enough!)

(REPEAT CHORUS)

& Soon There's KIDS and The Family Life
Then, They Grow Up & The Grandkids Arrive
With Luck, There's "Retirement", "Travel", & Such
(One Thing You WILL Learn IS "Don't Put Off TOO Much")

(CHORUS REPEAT) (with 'Cuz again)

Well, Someday You'll See That "TUNNEL OF LIGHT"
When Life Flickers-OUT, & ON to Your Next Sight/Site
WILL It Be HEAVEN? (OR That 6-Inch HOLE?)
It AIN'T Up To YOU, & GOD-ONLY KNOWS~

(CHORUS)
And IT'S ONLY A MATTER OF TIME
You'll Climb All The Steps You Can Climb
IT'S ONLY A MATTER OF TIME
You'll Be Lookin' Behind....

(TAG)
IT'S ONLY A MATTER OF TIME--

(C) 2008 by Stan Good, BMI
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Thanks for posting these Lynn and Stan. Two very different kinds of songs with the same hook. That was a very interesting way to imply reincarnation, Stan.


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hey i am writting one for this...i really love taking part in such competetion..

but it'll take a lil time coz i am not-so-experienced as are people around..!!


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Nice One Jean.

Stan what a brilliant line Tinkle and Garfinkle.

Brilliant, The great writers did this a lot re spelling a word
to rhyme Clever Stuff.

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It's only a matter of time
before your be mine
each day apart I dream of you
Can't get the thought of losing you
out of my mind, of my mind
(makes me act the fool too)

When I think back to the time we first met
I seem to recall that my heart raced ahead
thinking of your touch as I dreamed of your kiss
made me realise that I needed to taste
the sweet nectar on your lips

It's only a matter of time
before I'm yours tonight
every day together is like a dream
Can't believe that your be mine
that your be mine
(tonight)


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Thanks for posting, Never!

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here's a mine...personally i don't like it much..{and neither of you'd like it..i suppose..!!}

[Chorus]

counting rusted dungeon rods
blamed for walking on the roads
which never was his destiny
swaying on the raft of memory
it's all the matter of time

V1

He used to be an ordinary man
with unordinary dreams in his eyes
he gave his heart to a woman
they spent hours talking, walking miles

V2

It was a cold, snowy christmas night
He never thought where he'd see the light
His best friend and his girlfriend
{who sworned to walk along till the end}

[Chorus]

counting rusted dungeon rods
blamed for walking on the roads
which never was his destiny
swaying on the raft of memory
it's all the matter of time

V3

they all were drunk and unconsious
not knowing what actually they are doing
playin' innocently along with loaded gun
the shot killed his little brother

[Lift]

police raided the house, they ran away
and left him alone to wait for yesterday

[Chorus]

counting rusted dungeon rods
blamed for walking on the roads
which never was his destiny
swaying on the raft of memory
it's all the matter of time

[Bridge]

now they call him a fugitive
His heart full of rage
killing both was his only motive
planning to escape the cage
one night he escaped

next morning,
he rang the bell of the door
she opens the door and stepped aback
he pulls out the gun
aimed on her head and
empties the gun in a blink

[Chorus]

counting rusted dungeon rods
blamed for walking on the roads
which never was his destiny
swaying on the raft of memory
it's all the matter of time

[outro]

And he walks back to sheriff
and chooses to spend his life
behind the same ol' rusted bars
for the life remained so far...

(c) Prayag Thakkar, 2008


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OK Miss Jean, I just write this, right here, this is the first draft and it's as on demand as I could get!! (very fun!)


Time
© Caroline Holder

She left me with nothing
but a mess of a life
packed up everything
she could find
but my friends tell me
it's only a matter of time

They say she'll come back
she'll se whats she lost
but I'm the one
who's paid the cost
and they tell me
it's only a matter of time

Chorus
But Time is all I seem to have, anymore
Time too look back at what I've lost
Time to try to move forward
There's nothing else that holds my attention
more than those constant reminders of Time


I hear that clock ticking
it's getting louder
as my heart tries
to do without her
and my friends tell me
It's Only a Matter of Time

I see those hands moving
slower by the second
as I try to pull
in another breath
and my friends tell me
It's Only a Matter of Time

But Time is all I seem to have, anymore
Time to look back at what I've lost
Time to try and move forward
There's nothing else that holds my attention
More than those constant reminders of Time

Br.
I've replaced the battery, over and over
She's coming by to talk in a little while
and I don't want to miss one second of her

C-
Time is all I seem to have, anymore
Time to look back at what went wrong
Time to make plans to move forward
There's nothing holding onto my attention
Like the constant reminders of Time

Time is all I need to prove to her
Time is all it will take to move on
Time to get her back and unpacked
Time's the only thing holding my attention
I need this contant reminder that I've got... Time



Caroline


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It's Only A Matter Of Time

Sometimes when you want something so badly
You're willing to pay any price
Even though you see it's going sadly
Still you won't even think twice

Chorus:It's Only a matter of time until I don't love you
It's only a matter of time until I don't care
I'll be free of any feelings I have left for you
I have felt the deception in the air

Still you find yourself believing
That somehow you can make it right
But in the end you'll be seeing
All you ever do is fuss and fight
Chorus
You wonder if there's hope for tomorrow
You wonder if you'll survive the night
Are you looking for some wisdom to borrow
In the end you hope everything will be right
Chorus
Music solo
Chorus
END

(C)John Baker 2008

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Life was once a beautiful thing when we were able to live it.Love is such a beautiful thing when we are able to give it.Time alas has no meaning when there is no time but it takes but a moment for one to be so kind
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It’s only a matter of time

Copyright 2008 by Kennan Zishka

So it’s the worst of news
Dividing what yours and mine
So now I’m searching for clues
In the things you left behind

It’s only a matter of time
Just mind over matter
To find out what comes after
This lonely lost laughter of mine

A book you thought I’d like
A frame without a picture
I thought it was an antique
But you said just old furniture

It’s only a matter of time
Just mind over matter
To find out what comes after
This lonely lost laughter of mine

Tumbling down this slope
I can only hope

It’s only a matter of time
Just mind over matter
To find out what comes after
This lonely lost laughter of mine

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Okay, my first on-demand set of lyrics, first draft written in about an hour.
Since I'm new at this game, I welcome critiques here:
Link to thread for critique of this song.

It's only a matter of time. By Danny Michaels.

Verse 1.
It was our 18th summer,
You were my dream come true.
We did everything together.
Our world was me and you.
Now I'm looking at my future,
and I don't see you there.
Separate schools are calling us,
and I'm not sure you care.

Anticipation: That Its

Chorus:
Only a matter of time, before the leaves begin to fall.
Only a matter of time, before we’re giving school our all.
Only a matter of time, before we're strangers at the mall.
Only a matter of time, before you..don't..call.

Verse 2.
Camping fires and sleeping bags,
We went months without a care.
Our nights were filled with passion,
In the Georgia mountain air.
We'd often say, "I love you."
But was love really there?
My world's about to shatter,
Aching Heart beware.

Anticipation: Because its

Chorus:
Only a matter of time, before the leaves begin to fall.
Only a matter of time, before we’re giving school our all.
Only a matter of time, before we're strangers at the mall.
Only a matter of time, before you..don't..call.

Verse 3:
It was good to hear your voice today,
on the telephone.
You said you didn't like your school,
And you'd be comin' home.
I wanted to support you,
Say, "You should really think this through."
When through your tears you said to me,
"I just want to be with you."

Anticipation: I thought it was

Chorus:
Only a matter of time, before the leaves began to fall.
Only a matter of time, before we’re giving school our all.
Only a matter of time, before we're strangers at the mall.
I guess its
Only a matter of time, before love, conquers all.

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Ok ya'll, I did this rather quickly and i'm actually still working on it, but here is what I have so far...

It's Only A Matter Of Time

Long lonely nights
Spent all alone
Tear stains on your pillow
Helded tightly to my chest,

Our love always felt so right.

Haunting cries late Into the night
Reaching out for you
Cold empty sheets, fist tight in my hands
Only my thoughts of you, but you're nowhere in sight

As I snuffle back the tears
In my heart, for us I know

Baby, Baby, Baby

It's Only A Matter Of Time

We'll rekindle OUR fire
Two souls melting into one
Heated passions of romance
Bursting into the air

Not conscious of time or place
No worries, no cares
Shimmering silhouetts
Fireplace images will be erased

So, Baby, this I know....

For Us,

It's Only A Matter Of Time

We'll rekindle Our fire
Two souls melting as one
Heated passions of romance
Bursting into the air.......



It's Only A Matter Of Time

Only A Matter Of Time

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Thanks for the submissions folks. Sorry I haven't been around. Work has been keeping me too busy. As usual, I love seeing the variety people are able to produce.
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This isn't exactly terribly well done, or even re-written yet. The thing is though, it's true. A friend of ours has a lung disease that will not get better, It's one of my wife's best friends, and she is one sharp cookie. This was more for my benefit than critique, but feel free...

A Matter of Time

She’s a good Mom
She’s a good wife
With a big heart
And a fine life

But all the best intentions
Care and interventions

Won’t bring time to its knees
Or stem the tide of her disease
But it don’t mean she won’t stop tryin’
Nothing keeps her hope down
Even knowing that it’s over
And it’s all just a matter of time
It’s all just a matter of time


Now she might try
To change her diet
If it gives hope
She has to try it

And it makes her feel good inside
Knowing she's got love in her life

But it won’t bring time to its knees
Or stem the tide of her disease
But it don’t mean she won’t stop tryin’
Nothing keeps her hope down
Even knowing that it’s over
And it’s all just a matter of time
It’s all just a matter of time


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Sad but very good use of the hook. My sympathies to her and all her loved ones.


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This is my first time posting here. Thought this challenge would be a good place to start.

It's Only a Matter of Time

She may have been down
She may have been out
She may have been drowning
In pity and doubt
But these days she's holding her own

She may have been lost
She may have been wrong
She may have been twisted
Around all along
But these days she's not so alone

She lights up a cigarette
Opens a bottle of wine
She takes in the sustenance
Born of the leaf and the vine
He's with her today
The good times will last for a while
But he'll go away
It's only a matter of time

He may have been good
He may have been true
He may have been hoping
One woman would do
But these days he's knows what he's not

And these days are all that he's got

She lights up a cigarette
Opens a bottle of wine
She offers him sustenance
Tells him their stars are aligned
He's with her today
The good times will last for a while
But he'll go away
It's only a matter of time

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To be in line with the wondering sun
It's a matter of time
One feels like all when the planets are none
It's a matter of time

When a light won't focus
As the dark stays closest
Even stars won't keep their energy for us
It's a matter of a sign
It's a matter to unwind
It's a matter of time

Mostly musical as I was inspired to hear this, so please excuse the brief lyrics, (and the "Only"). The two sections would just repeat twice when the singing comes back in, with more and more vocal layering for each of the three times, mainly to drive this song's point that may or not be obvious.

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ive never done one of these, but here goes nothing. This one looked fun, so I whipped this up quick.....

I drank too much and slept around
you come home Im nowhere to be found
Late nights at hotels and bars
I hope you didnt get very far

Its only a matter of time till you wise up and leave
Its only a matter of time till I wonder where you'll be

Your mom says your far away
your sister says you changed your ways
your friends say you dont need me
you finally wise'd up I see

Its only a matter of time till you wise up and leave
Its only a matter of time till I wonder where you will be

I guess you found out I lied
covered my ass, or so I tried
so now I sleep cold and alone
Just like you did when I was never home

Its only a matter of time till you wise up and leave
Its only a matter of time till I wonder where you will be


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Thanks for the submissions, everyone.


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