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Hey Vondelle L---I just can't get over how that "rings"---Just listen at this-----
Vondelle LLLLLL
Oh Vondelle LLLLL
Rings like a bellllll
Oh Vondelle LLLLLLLLL

Can'tcha' 'pert near hear bells ringing?
Kinda' reminds me of Big Ben only Big Ben has lost his voice after 150 years. Gosh, no wonder.

Well Vondelle L, I waanted to build up the suspense about the dog and then spring it like in the bridge but maybe I could
Make the 5th line of each V "WE'll talk about the dog later?
and then leave it off the C?
Wy
(Dang you folks are hard to satisfy <G>)

I learned a ditty when I was 12

Oh Mrs, bliss
she went to pi-----------------------------------ck a little flower
And in the grass she wet her a------------------nkles right to her knees
And in the yard, she let a far--------------------------mer pass her by
And in the coop, she let a poo----------------------------- r old chicken die.

now about the dog----let's think think think think think, since the hook is let's split it--- so you sing/say "Now about the dog" and make people wait------------------- just a teeny bit then go on with the Chorus as tho you forgot about the dog and let's split it--I'll guarantee you a laugh from all who hear!!!

ANNIE TENNESCO!!!!!!!!!!!
If uou learned that when you were 12, it kinda' boggles the mind to think of what all you mighta' learned "since" then <G>
Hmmm, that's a good idea on the dog. It'd be kinda' up to the singer to pull it off but shouldn't be a big prorlem. I will explore the ,uh, possibilities.
Now I ghotta' have more coffee
Wy

Hello Wy,

Good job on the lyric. I enjoyed reading it as well as the responses.

You kindled a few creative fires with this posting. Lots of good comments.

I think this "dog" will hunt.

Peace,

Nathan

Hi Nathan. Welcome to the board if I haven't done that before. Yeah, you can get a lot of good song ideas from reading the lyrics and comments. Usually, if I get one, it's from a line in a lyric and I think, "Heck, that could be a song too"
Thanks on the lyrics. They did stir up quite a discussion , didn't they?
"I think this "dog" will hunt."---I like that saying. Seems like there's an almost title there too. "Wiil hunt", "Won't hunt", "Ain't gonna' hunt no more"-------Reminds me of some old poets lines that I always liked----

Home is the sailor
Home from the sea
And the hunter
Home from the hill
Wy