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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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PETE
by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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"Littered Dreams"
©2007 John Daubert
First path chosen with fire in the eyes
Never ending gold framed pictures to chase
Winter showing it's whitest cold
Timber left un-cut, leaves curling, recycling in the ground
Talks of spring and adventures to run after
Finding that first fresh path again to please the senses
Yet another littered dream, left not that far behind, but this time, for good.
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Whoa....Heavy there John! Here's my response:
Recycled dreams
©2007 Iggy Taylor
Dreams of a child, so innocent and pure
Cast aside as I begin to mature
Dreams of an adult filled with hope of what’s to be
Fallen by the wayside as I struggle just being me
Dreams of an older person filled with hope for a cure
Wanting only to be a child so I may dream once more
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Yeah,,,his rhymes. Is good though, you're right.
I just wrote thoughts as they came.
Is that wrong?!!!
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I can hear Iggy's verse in my mind's ear...
like the voice in the Moody Blues tune - same rhythm.
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John,
I am responding to your question, "Is that wrong?" NOPE. Now, instead of one idea called, "Littered Dreams," there are two ideas with the newer one called, "Recycled Dreams." Both different. Both wonderful. All it shows is two different artistic viewpoints on the same subject. Love both creations. Would love to hear more on the same subject from others. It's an awesome subject, John. Awesome subjects are like candy to a writer. Well done on that.
Heidi
"And, in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make." Paul McCartney
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