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Real Deal
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/07/26 01:38 AM
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Flyte
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/06/26 05:36 PM
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This is just a fast folk-rock song that I wrote, about a vision I had once,that then turned into several dreams.
"FIREFALL"
(INTRO)
FIRE
I SEE FIRE
I SEE..
A FIREFALL
(VERSE 1)
In a clearing was a fire
As the rain began to fall
Where thirteen men would gather
Twelve men had faces that's all
Who could this thirteenth man be
Who came to stand at this place
And why did he repeat phrases
From a white faceless face
(VERSE 2)
Could it be that this man
Who mocked me without a face
Was there to let me know that
One day I'd take his place
This was a dream I had
Where I'd venture to meet them all
In a clearing by a fire
As the rain began to fall
(CHORUS)
I SEE FIRE - I SEE FIRE
I SEE A FIRE FALL
I SEE FIRE - I SEE FIRE
YEA I SEE.. A FIRE FALL
(VERSE 3)
Could a dream become reality
Could a dream become so real
Could a dream be a vision
Of the changes that I feel
Could a dream be the answer
To what's happenin' to me
Could a dream be a sign
That will set my soul free
(CHORUS)
I SEE FIRE - I SEE FIRE
I SEE A FIRE FALL
I SEE FIRE - I SEE FIRE
YEA I SEE.. A FIRE FALL
FIRE
I SEE FIRE
I SEE
A FIREFALL
Written by Monte Shockley
© 1995
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Mornin' Scoot,
Couple of questions....what phrases was he saying????
and faceless face seems a stumbler to me...the repetition...maybe out-of-focus face
I like where you are going with this...and a lot of folks will understand it right off the bat....wish I was in that advanced group.
dawg
Wisdom does not always accompany age. Sometimes
age just shows up alone.
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hey greydog.He was repeating every muffled word & phrase from the one man,& as that man moved around, he was always even with him. no, not out of focus, he had no face at all. white,& feacherless
Thanks for your comments,Scoot
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Sorry, I don't get it... But I think it reads like some heavy metal thing...
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Scoot..I'm not sure I get it either...but.. it really seems like it would be a good rock song!!!! Kaley ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif)
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Thanks everybody for checking this song out. I guess this song may have been a little too Inside & Personal for you to understand.
I'm truely sorry for that..
Sincerly,
Scoot
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