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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 10:48 PM
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the move
when she gives you that look
that says anything you want
you make your move
it's at that moment you understand
the beat behind the groove
slowly she undresses you with her eyes
together in passion, together in heat
you make your move
at this time you realize
the pleasure of being renewed
before too long you are caught in her grip
feeling trapped like a baited rat
you make your move
it's at this time you notice
a change in her mood
she senses your discontent
she knows when you are spent
she makes her move
suddenly kisses last longer
a change in attitude
your hands caress like never before
searching seeking breathing hard
you make your move
an enlightened newness overcomes
a lovers interlude
© 2003 by sweetjoyce
® 2003 by random noise productions
[This message has been edited by sweetjoyce (edited 12-21-2003).]
[This message has been edited by sweetjoyce (edited 12-21-2003).]
[This message has been edited by sweetjoyce (edited 12-21-2003).]
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Hello Joyce,
I like the overall feel of this. Maybe a little sultry, which ain't a bad thing. This format is different than I write in usually...like Verse, chorus, so I am not sure how it'd sound. Love to hear it if you get some music going for it.
Tony
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Hi Tony thanks much though this lyric hasn't been put to song yet, for a better perspective of genre i say welcome to random noise http://www.random-noise.com/audio.html
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