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Hi Everyone! Thought this was an appropriate time to bring this one back. I still like it....hope you do, too.
Happy New Year! (I smoothed it out just a little)

Verse 1
New Year's Eve is almost here
You can see it all around
Confetti, streamers, party hats
Fill every window in town
Decorations red and green
Now glitter silver and gold
Lovers stealing one last kiss
Beneath the mistletoe

Chorus
It's another lover's holiday
A reason to be near
To the keeper of your heart
The one that you hold dear
It's another lover's holiday
Time to share a little cheer
Cuddle close and raise a toast
To another year

Verse 2
New Year's Eve is almost here
You can feel it in the air
Snowflakes softly floating down
Lots of laughter everywhere
No more restaurant reservations
Hotels and ballrooms oversold
Celebrations large and small
For lovers young and old

Chorus
It's another lover's holiday
A reason to be near
To the keeper of your heart
The one that you hold dear
It's another lover's holiday
Time to share a little cheer
Cuddle close and raise a toast
To another year

Tag:
There'll be kissing and
reminiscing
From New York to Tangiers
And my love is far away
Well.....maybe next year

(c) 2000 srl
And if Cindy is around....Happy Birthday!


[This message has been edited by Sunny (edited 12-31-2000).]

Hey Lady....I still like this...I want
to rework one line...but it may be just me.

Fill windows in every town....for flow...but
you know.....how that goes....I sure don't always fol...lows.

when you critique.... just keep going down
farther on the screen and there will be the
post you're commenting on. I couldn't
find it at first either...also have you checked the edit funciton...(function)
up there at the first pencil (click and it's
an edit and delete)..and I know someone's
gonna tell me....there's a spell check.

P.s...I hope you do get to see him again soon.
have a happy........

[This message has been edited by Kaley Willow (edited 12-31-2000).]

Thanks Kaley. For some reason this song really tugs at my heart. Hoping to get some music for it soon. Maybe I just feel it more than others, but would still like to see it set to music. Have some prospects. Happy New Year!

Hi Sunny,

Love the hook. I got what Kaley had a problem with. There seems to be an extra syllable there. This may go away in the singing (evry or winwow'n) so it is unlikely a big problem.

Good tag too!

John

Thanks John....nice to have you back.

Thanks Wyman....should have caught that "another" thing...easy enough to fix. Might just slur "kissing 'n reminiscing"....and will work with the window line if/when I get music. Think that will be easy, too. Nice to have you back. Hope you had a wonderful holiday.

Oooops....Wyman...forgot softly/floating...you are right on that as usual. Perhaps if I could sing without scaring the cat I might figure these things out

hello sunny
the last line in the chorus works 'cause you can hold the notes out which adds emphasis to the line if thats what you wanted etc. Real nice seasonal tune.
Kenny