29 Days out of 30

29 Days out of 30 #1218001 08/17/26 10:16 PM
Joined: Oct 2017 Posts: 9,129 Likes: 99 F Fdemetrio OP Top 20 Poster
OP Fdemetrio Top 20 Poster F Joined: Oct 2017 Posts: 9,129 Likes: 99	Wrote this in my head today, in traffic. Haven't finished the track, mostly cause 99% of the lurkers don't listen to the track, don't know what kinda dope the lurkers are on. But also gives me a chance to watch it develop. Sometimes we get left out of our own songs. I still don't write love songs, im good at post love songs lol 29 Days out of 30 I kicked the mailbox You slammed the door You called me a loser I called you a...bore I got the flat screen Watch it all the time You got the suv I Hope sometime that you can see That.... 29 days out of 30 I Forget how you did me dirty I'm back in the game Makin love and feelin flirty 29 days out of 30 You got the Townhouse dudes been goin there Our nosey old neighbor said He's fat and has no hair You turned our friends against me Guess they never were Might be time to call them up ask them all to call your bluff Yeah, 29 days out of 30 I Forget how you did me dirty I'm back in the game Makin love and feelin flirty 29 days out of 30 Yeah, Every once in a while, Like, one day a month I think of you Shed a tear or two Then cough up my lunch 29 days out of 30 I Forget how you did me dirty I'm back in the game Makin love and feelin flirty 29 days out of 30 Last edited by Fdemetrio; 08/18/26 02:45 PM.

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Fdemetrio #1218002 08/17/26 11:59 PM
Joined: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,556 Likes: 90 Victoria,BC Canada Bill Draper Top 200 Poster
Bill Draper Top 200 Poster Joined: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,556 Likes: 90 Victoria,BC Canada	I like the lyric and music style…good stuff. Short version one minute…nice traffic inspiration..lol!

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Bill Draper #1218005 08/18/26 02:44 PM
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OP Fdemetrio Top 20 Poster F Joined: Oct 2017 Posts: 9,129 Likes: 99	Originally Posted by Bill Draper I like the lyric and music style…good stuff. Short version one minute…nice traffic inspiration..lol! Thanks Bill Last edited by Fdemetrio; 08/20/26 12:33 AM.

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Fdemetrio #1218010 08/19/26 11:52 AM
Joined: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,556 Likes: 90 Victoria,BC Canada Bill Draper Top 200 Poster
Bill Draper Top 200 Poster Joined: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,556 Likes: 90 Victoria,BC Canada	Proceeding well. Interesting the way one can build the song in Udio. Lyric wise, I like the jolt in the bridge, that once a month, violent physical reaction….just what a good bridge should do! Ha. can you get Udio to do the art in the bridge? Interested. Bill

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Bill Draper #1218015 08/20/26 12:34 AM
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OP Fdemetrio Top 20 Poster F Joined: Oct 2017 Posts: 9,129 Likes: 99	Originally Posted by Bill Draper Proceeding well. Interesting the way one can build the song in Udio. Lyric wise, I like the jolt in the bridge, that once a month, violent physical reaction….just what a good bridge should do! Ha. can you get Udio to do the art in the bridge? Interested. Bill These actually are pre choruses, but i guess they do Bridge from one part to another. Bridges are much more important in pop music, like this. Nearly done... now with a bridge too https://www.udio.com/songs/hmAF7ERZZYKp4sGBi7yVRY Last edited by Fdemetrio; 08/20/26 09:15 AM.

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Fdemetrio #1218017 08/20/26 01:58 PM
Joined: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,556 Likes: 90 Victoria,BC Canada Bill Draper Top 200 Poster
Bill Draper Top 200 Poster Joined: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,556 Likes: 90 Victoria,BC Canada	It’s important in the song, because most of the lyric is her, pissing him off, in his head. So what’s the one day do for an encore, so to speak….barf guts out…lol. Needs lots of highlighter. Bill

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Fdemetrio #1218021 08/20/26 09:25 PM
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OP Fdemetrio Top 20 Poster F Joined: Oct 2017 Posts: 9,129 Likes: 99	Thanks bill, the only listener here. Yeah, its kinda tongue in cheek, I was totally thinking of this song when it came to me Last edited by Fdemetrio; 08/20/26 09:26 PM.

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Fdemetrio #1218039 08/24/26 01:19 PM
Joined: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,556 Likes: 90 Victoria,BC Canada Bill Draper Top 200 Poster
Bill Draper Top 200 Poster Joined: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,556 Likes: 90 Victoria,BC Canada	Yes. I see what you mean. it’s a good style! Bill

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Fdemetrio #1218090 08/29/26 12:07 PM
Joined: Jan 2017 Posts: 4,565 Likes: 143 Nashville -California, The to... bennash Top 100 Poster
bennash Top 100 Poster Joined: Jan 2017 Posts: 4,565 Likes: 143 Nashville -California, The to...	Originally Posted by Fdemetrio Originally Posted by Bill Draper Proceeding well. Interesting the way one can build the song in Udio. Lyric wise, I like the jolt in the bridge, that once a month, violent physical reaction….just what a good bridge should do! Ha. can you get Udio to do the art in the bridge? Interested. Bill These actually are pre choruses, but i guess they do Bridge from one part to another. Bridges are much more important in pop music, like this. Nearly done... now with a bridge too https://www.udio.com/songs/hmAF7ERZZYKp4sGBi7yVRY Ok you listened to my song . So I'll listen to robot songs .. Sounds good to me >Bruce would be proud, Udio sounds like a venereal disease . I'd use Suno https://www.instagram.com/reel/Dbiyc8-MnnM/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link&igsi=NTc4MTIwNjQ2YQ== Last edited by bennash; 08/29/26 12:42 PM. We’re all built from the same dust and dreams, Different roads, but the same means.

Re: 29 Days out of 30 Fdemetrio #1218342 09/16/26 06:50 PM
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johnparagreen Serious Contributor J Joined: Sep 2020 Posts: 93 Likes: 1 fife scotland	I. like the title/idea, but I'd like to hear more intense venom, I'd get that flat screen in the pawn shop, hehe all the best, john. please visit my soundclick page to hear songs recorded by musicians world wide https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandid=429802

Re: 29 Days out of 30 johnparagreen #1218351 09/17/26 05:32 PM
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OP Fdemetrio Top 20 Poster F Joined: Oct 2017 Posts: 9,129 Likes: 99	Originally Posted by johnparagreen I. like the title/idea, but I'd like to hear more intense venom, I'd get that flat screen in the pawn shop, hehe all the best, john. Thanks I went more pop with it, if I did a punk version might be different. Plus I dont wanna bury the woman, just let her know who's boss

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