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by Rob B. - 05/09/26 02:39 PM
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Max Ceddo
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/09/26 12:54 PM
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Real Deal
by Brian Austin Whitney - 05/07/26 01:38 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 05/06/26 05:36 PM
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Everybody on TV is talking about the ceasefire in the Middle East, which is a good thing. But the strange thing is… nobody seems to be ceasing fire. Missiles still fly, headlines still call it peace, and everybody claims victory. It’s absurd. Sad. Confusing. I tried to capture that contradiction in this lyric.
The Great Ceasefire
Verse Breaking news at 2 a.m. Another “peace” on CNN Smoke still rising from the shore But they say we’re at war no more
Verse A handshake written in disappearing ink Everybody talks, does anybody think? Missiles lighting up the screen While diplomats say “mostly clean”
Pre-chorus One side tweets “won” One side counts graves One side redraws the maps again One side fans the flames
Chorus The Great Ceasefire But nobody ceases fire Everybody says “peace” As the flames climb higher Whoa-oh-oh Wave the white flag higher Whoa-oh-oh The Great Ceasefire
Verse Lebanon - or maybe not Depends on who just took the shot Tankers drifting through the strait Pay the toll or test your fate
Verse Two more weeks turns into months Truth gets buried in the dust Everybody plays pretend Till the next attack begins
Pre-chorus One side tweets “won” One side counts graves One side redraws the maps again One side fans the flames
Chorus The Great Ceasefire But nobody ceases fire Everybody says “peace” As the flames climb higher Whoa-oh-oh Wave the white flag higher Whoa-oh-oh The Great Ceasefire
Bridge Who’s making the deals while the bombers still fly? Who’s holding the cards while the whole world asks why? Everybody wants credit, nobody knows the cost History’s never seen a ceasefire this lost
Final chorus The Great Ceasefire But nobody ceases fire Everybody says “peace” As the flames climb higher Whoa-oh-oh Wave the white flag higher Whoa-oh-oh The Great Ceasefire
Outro The Great Ceasefire But nobody ceases fire
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Cathartic Rob I am sure...but I am not sure it is lyric material...not sure if anyone really wants to hear it this way.
There may be an angle that works, but I'm not sure this is it
Perhaps an allegory....don't know how to stop when we start?
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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Cathartic Rob I am sure...but I am not sure it is lyric material...not sure if anyone really wants to hear it this way.
There may be an angle that works, but I'm not sure this is it
Perhaps an allegory....don't know how to stop when we start? So you mean something more like this... The Great CeasefireVerse We said “enough” at 2 a.m. Turned off the lights, turned off the blame But smoke still hanging in the room Like broken words we can’t undo Verse A handshake written down in disappearing ink We say we’re fine - does anybody think? Cold eyes glowing in the dark Two matches waiting for a spark Pre-Chorus One side says “done” One side keeps score One side closes every door One side tries to restart the war Chorus The Great Ceasefire But nobody ceases fire Everybody says “peace” While the flames climb higher Whoa-oh-oh Wave the white flag higher Whoa-oh-oh The Great Ceasefire Verse Every conversation bends Back to where the damage ends You say stop, I say fine Then we cross another line Verse Two more weeks, another round Love gets buried underground We hold each other like a threat And call it compromise instead Chorus Bridge Who’s making the rules when nobody can win? Who’s keeping the scars underneath the skin? Everybody wants mercy, nobody wants loss History repeats when the lines stay crossed Chorus
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