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Tony has a way of hiding some seriously catchy hook lines in his rants. I’m not really in the mood for writing songs right now, but when I read those lines, my brain immediately started creating new lines - I couldn’t resist. This turned into one of the catchiest songs I’ve come up with in a while. Thanks for the inspiration.

A Fly That Won’t Die
https://soundclick.com/song/15230650

[Intro]

[Verse]
You walk in like you own the place
Big talk, but it’s all misplaced
Typing fast but it makes no sense
Every line just a weak defense

You brag loud like you cracked the code
But you're stuck on the same old road
Spellcheck crying, waving a flag
Still you flex like you never lag

[Pre-Chorus]
All that noise, but you say nothing
Hit “send” and it’s just bluffing

[Chorus]
You're a fly that won't die
Buzzin' loud but you still can't fly
You still can't spell, even with AI
Talk so big but it's all a lie

You're a fly that won't die
Round and round, just wasting time
You still can't spell, even with AI
Yeah, you try, but you can't get by

[Break]

[Verse]
Autocorrect tried to save your case
But it gave up without a trace
Every post is a comedy show
Did you mean that? We'll never know

Caps lock on like you're in a fight
But your words don’t land right
You swing hard but you miss the mark
All that spark, but it’s just dark

[Pre-Chorus]
All that noise, yeah it’s so empty
Loud and wrong on every entry

[Chorus]
You're a fly that won't die
Buzzin' loud but you still can't fly
You still can't spell, even with AI
Talk so big but it's all a lie

You're a fly that won't die
Round and round, just wasting time
You still can't spell, even with AI
Yeah, you try, but you can't get by

[Bridge]
Round and round, same mistake
Every word you overtake
Mirror’s cracked, but you still pose
Everyone sees, but nobody knows

[Breakdown]
Buzz, buzz—hear that sound?
Going nowhere, circling round
Buzz, buzz—say it twice
Still don’t make it sound that nice

[Final Chorus]
You're a fly that won't die
Buzzin' loud but you still can't fly
You still can't spell, even with AI
Talk so big but it's all a lie

You're a fly that won't die
Endless loop, no reason why
You still can't spell, even with AI
Fade away, just say goodbye

[Outro]
You're a fly that won't die

That is a catchy song.
Funny too.

Hooky as all Jason Mraz ....love it Rob.

Haha yeah, it’s dangerously catchy. The best part is the guy it’s about has no clue it’s about him. Thanks a lot for the feedback!

Haha yeah - comparing someone to a fly buzzing around getting on everyone’s nerves… makes you just want it to go away. That’s something only Tony could come up with. Suno really nailed the bridge section too. Thanks, John, appreciate the feedback!