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For Dom
by JAPOV - 04/30/26 09:52 PM
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Nothing
by JAPOV - 04/27/26 10:49 AM
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WHEN?
by JAPOV - 04/23/26 11:28 PM
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Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 8,515 Likes: 85
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I was twiddling with a rubber band, and suddenly this came me, a chorus fully formed.
Other than that, I have NO idea where it came from.
Elastic hearts
Thats what were gonna need
This fantastic start
Our love's a rubber breed
We can Stretch it as far
As Infidelity
They all come snappin back
Our elastic heart dreams
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 03/24/26 09:16 PM.
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Joined: Jun 2019
Posts: 7,272 Likes: 175
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I was twiddling with a rubber band, and suddenly this came me, a chorus fully formed.
Other than that, I have NO idea where it came from.
Elastic hearts
Thats what were gonna need
This fantastic start
Our love's a rubber breed
We can Stretch it as far
As Infidelity
They all come snappin back
Our elastic heart dreams "Fully Formed...?" I think you jumped the gun a bit, Dom... Jut like Rob lol. "A rubber breed...? Lol, that's gotta' go. "Elastic heart dreams..." you went for a rhyme instead of continuity... "Stretch to infidelity" is good, but the rest is crap. And, as usual, in your arrogance, you went straight to AI with your own thread. Seriously, Dom... what are you thinking?
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT'S ALREADY BEEN DELETED...
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Joined: Jul 2002
Posts: 1,426 Likes: 82
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I like the direction FD is taking because it is consistent with my original idea of being flexible in life, to survive, to succeed, to go forward, etc.
But Japov is making good technical observations. The solution may be keep writing a ton more lines until more good stuff emerges, like the infidelity being one’s relationship flex limit. 😏😑
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Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 8,515 Likes: 85
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Top 20 Poster
Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 8,515 Likes: 85 |
I was twiddling with a rubber band, and suddenly this came me, a chorus fully formed.
Other than that, I have NO idea where it came from.
Elastic hearts
Thats what were gonna need
This fantastic start
Our love's a rubber breed
We can Stretch it as far
As Infidelity
They all come snappin back
Our elastic heart dreams "Fully Formed...?" I think you jumped the gun a bit, Dom... Jut like Rob lol. "A rubber breed...? Lol, that's gotta' go. "Elastic heart dreams..." you went for a rhyme instead of continuity... "Stretch to infidelity" is good, but the rest is crap. And, as usual, in your arrogance, you went straight to AI with your own thread. Seriously, Dom... what are you thinking? I was twiddling with a rubber band, and suddenly this came me, a chorus fully formed.
Other than that, I have NO idea where it came from.
Elastic hearts
Thats what were gonna need
This fantastic start
Our love's a rubber breed
We can Stretch it as far
As Infidelity
They all come snappin back
Our elastic heart dreams "Fully Formed...?" I think you jumped the gun a bit, Dom... Jut like Rob lol. "A rubber breed...? Lol, that's gotta' go. "Elastic heart dreams..." you went for a rhyme instead of continuity... "Stretch to infidelity" is good, but the rest is crap. And, as usual, in your arrogance, you went straight to AI with your own thread. Seriously, Dom... what are you thinking? I disagree, its good pop material. I think elastic hearts is a phenomenal hook I like rubber breed. How is it arrogant starting a song thread. When I see your other reviews, you are so full of crap, nobody could take you seriously..
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 03/25/26 04:30 AM.
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Joined: Oct 2017
Posts: 8,515 Likes: 85
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I like the direction FD is taking because it is consistent with my original idea of being flexible in life, to survive, to succeed, to go forward, etc.
But Japov is making good technical observations. The solution may be keep writing a ton more lines until more good stuff emerges, like the infidelity being one’s relationship flex limit. 😏😑 Good lines all over it and its just a chorus. I disagree 100% and I pitch it to myself
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 03/25/26 04:28 AM.
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