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Rob
by Rob B. - 05/25/26 11:14 PM
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A test
by Fdemetrio - 05/25/26 09:19 PM
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Joined: Jul 2002
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This is still a work in progress for me....mic placement and guitar arrangement. I'll keep working at it to improve. KL's version are the one's to listen to.
[Verse 1]
You left me standing here
With my heart holding back its tears
And now I'm standing here
Holding on to you
[Verse 2]
I'm trying to recall
The last words that I said at all
Don't think they were goodbye
So I keep holding on
Verse 3
I'm still standing here
Minutes turn into empty years
My mind is lost but my heart's
Holding on to you
[Bridge]
My senses are useless
My body is numb, no emotion left
Everything's frozen in that one moment in time
[Outro]
Don't think that I can move
Where would I go without you?
I don't know what to do
So I keep standing here
Last edited by Bill Draper; 03/03/26 02:24 AM.
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Okay. now on to Take 2 and beyond. I am finally using chords G, A, D.....cycled. Key of D. I like KL version way better and suno version is good too. mine need mucho work, but learning lots.
Last edited by Bill Draper; 03/03/26 02:26 AM.
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Does sound a bit like Tom
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.
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Tom Petty-ish maybe lol  I like your version much better... Careful, you might mess around and teach Kay how to write a song!
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I’m so bad at this song stuff that I wonder why
And what I do do da yeah, forget it.
I like rhythm hand clapping, dance around, have funsongs
I like cry in your voice songs.
I like short to the point stuff.
I tried on Kay’s standing here, cause is so frikin crying sad….but I couldn’t get there…too personal, too intimate, needs be careful w that in a public forum.
So I go where?
Bang on the drums, sing any old thing, have fun.
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Plus learning the structure is enjoyable…like doing a puzzle and fitting the pieces. The prosody bit, though, is impossibly difficult, no?
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I’m so bad at this song stuff that I wonder why
And what I do do da yeah, forget it.
I like rhythm hand clapping, dance around, have funsongs
I like cry in your voice songs.
I like short to the point stuff.
I tried on Kay’s standing here, cause is so frikin crying sad….but I couldn’t get there…too personal, too intimate, needs be careful w that in a public forum.
So I go where?
Bang on the drums, sing any old thing, have fun. **** Thank for playing around with this melody, you're right it is very intimate and personal , sometimes even makes me cry. I try to use the least amount of words I can. I think you have talents you are unaware of darlin
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