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ASCAP & AI
by John Lawrence Schick - 06/26/26 05:46 PM
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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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Hey Fd
Cool you are still using udio.
I like this lyric. Great choice of language and imagery in these frosty harsh winter winds.
Did you try it with softer strings lusher sounds, etc.
Request: Could you block Tony and Poet from this thread? Just want to do a test on thread moderation.
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We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.
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Oh ok. I was going to add Ben to the block since you seem to have niggled…but he is good. Mature. Wise.
If this changes…block him?
Just an experiment folks, is all.
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Bill, This is Marty. I'm not posting here myself. But I was asked by another poster to post their comment for them because they were busy picking their nose. Getting back to the song, it's weak
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Bill, This is Marty. I'm not posting here myself. But I was asked by another poster their comment for them because they were busy picking their nose. Getting back to the song, it's weak Writevdimethujg better, I consider this s track not a dimg, had some fun, but say but not in its class, write a catcher hook all fone by my kyruc
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Bill, This is Marty. I'm not posting here myself. But I was asked by another poster their comment for them because they were busy picking their nose. Getting back to the song, it's weak Write something something better, I consider this abtrack not a somg. had some fun, but say wut is not in its class, write a catcher hook all done by my kyruc
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Dom
Come on
Play along
Block Poet
Just Do it
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Writevdimethujg better, I consider this s track not a , had some fun, but say but not in its class, write a catcher hook all fone by my kyruc I pasted that into google translate and it said that there is no language like this.
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Dom
Come on
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Block Poet
Just Do it Good idea.
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Waiting for Tony to arrive…get the block up Dom!
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Come on let’s test this thing and get it working.
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Not working so far. Marty is too quick
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I’m surprised he hasn’t blocked me yet…I’m being a pest.
Like to hear this with ukuleles though.
Any suno drivers in da building? Lol
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I’m surprised he hasn’t blocked me yet…I’m being a pest.
Like to hear this with ukuleles though.
Any suno drivers in da building? Lol ha ha ha Dom won't block you . its a catchy upbeat song . The autotune is a bit much. we only have 5 members can't block all 5
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Dom,
this is not my cup of tea. I think you've written much better songs. But apparently, a lot of people like it, so it's probably just me.
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Thanks Rob. I wrote that chorus long time ago, around the time lady Gaga released Bad Romance.
I couldn't figure out why that song was so good/popular. Wrote listening i cane to three points. That la la hook, is very powerful.
The hypnotic quality the track, and the production.
I thought let me try that. Fell short, but that melody is pretty much how I wrote it, took hours to hear it that way.
The verses only way it was working was a rap.
Its fun, rarely write a dong like that.
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Sorry, Dom... You know I have to be honest...
That's the most annoying thing I've ever heard!
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[chorus]
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is still with me
La la la lala
My Hawaiian dream must be someone that I know
La la la lala
My Hawaiian dream where did she go?
Under palm trees, I can hear the waves sway
Sun-kissed shores, they call me every day
Lost in a rhythm, where the breeze meets the sea
Harmonies of sunsets, it's just you and me
The colors of twilight, they paint the sky bright
Dance to the rhythm of the island's light
With every heartbeat, I'm drawn closer still
In this Hawaiian dream, I find my thrill
[Chorus]
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is still with me
Underneath the stars, where the ukulele strums
Feel the ocean's rhythm—oh, my heart just hums
With every gentle breeze, and the moon's soft glow
It's a paradise found, in the magic we know
I chase this feeling, like the waves to the shore
In this dance of love, I am wanting more
As the island whispers secrets in the night
It's my Hawaiian dream that makes everything right
[Chorus]
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is still with me
La la la lala My Hawaiian dream must be someone that I know
La la la lala My Hawaiian dream where did she go?
[chorus repeats] La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala That Hawaiian dream is still with me
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Frankly, these are the sort of lyrics I would expect from Rob...
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Sorry, Dom... You know I have to be honest...
That's the most annoying thing I've ever heard!
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[chorus]
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is still with me
La la la lala
My Hawaiian dream must be someone that I know
La la la lala
My Hawaiian dream where did she go?
Under palm trees, I can hear the waves sway
Sun-kissed shores, they call me every day
Lost in a rhythm, where the breeze meets the sea
Harmonies of sunsets, it's just you and me
The colors of twilight, they paint the sky bright
Dance to the rhythm of the island's light
With every heartbeat, I'm drawn closer still
In this Hawaiian dream, I find my thrill
[Chorus]
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is still with me
Underneath the stars, where the ukulele strums
Feel the ocean's rhythm—oh, my heart just hums
With every gentle breeze, and the moon's soft glow
It's a paradise found, in the magic we know
I chase this feeling, like the waves to the shore
In this dance of love, I am wanting more
As the island whispers secrets in the night
It's my Hawaiian dream that makes everything right
[Chorus]
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is still with me
La la la lala My Hawaiian dream must be someone that I know
La la la lala My Hawaiian dream where did she go?
[chorus repeats] La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala That Hawaiian dream is still with me
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Frankly, these are the sort of lyrics I would expect from Rob... That's alright, im not even crazy about it. Using this gives me chance to try other stuff. I agree it's annoying, turn on the radio, and be prepared to be annoyed all day
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Sorry, Dom... You know I have to be honest...
That's the most annoying thing I've ever heard!
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[chorus]
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is still with me
La la la lala
My Hawaiian dream must be someone that I know
La la la lala
My Hawaiian dream where did she go? In short, Mr Lied;
Rob and I had a conversation.
Rob and I reached resolve like adults. La la la lala My Hawaiian dream must be someone that I know
La la la lala My Hawaiian dream where did she go?
[chorus repeats] La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala That Hawaiian dream is still with me
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Frankly, these are the sort of lyrics I would expect from Rob...
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Apologies, I had the video set to private in the last post. I think that its public now
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In short, Mr Lied;
Rob and I had a conversation.
Rob and I reached resolve like adults. La la la lala My Hawaiian dream must be someone that I know
La la la lala My Hawaiian dream where did she go?
[chorus repeats] La la la lala
That Hawaiian dream is on my mind
La la la lala That Hawaiian dream is still with me
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Frankly, these are the sort of lyrics I would expect from Rob... Lol... Am I wrong?
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That's alright, im not even crazy about it. Using this gives me chance to try other stuff.
I agree it's annoying, turn on the radio, and be prepared to be annoyed all day Lol, I've certainly done worse  But, that autotune followed with rap makes my nose hair hurt!
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I hadn't thought about that. I'll let you all contemplate that and "reach resolve" regarding the song. I'm just glad to see you all treating each other so well.
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I hadn't thought about that. I'll let you all contemplate that and "reach resolve" regarding the song. I'm just glad to see you all treating each other so well. AWWWWWWWWWWW... I like it when you're feeling all sweet, endearing, warm-n-fuzzy  Now, go dance with your demons and try not to destroy the Earth.
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I hadn't thought about that. I'll let you all contemplate that and "reach resolve" regarding the song. I'm just glad to see you all treating each other so well. AWWWWWWWWWWW... I like it when you're feeling all sweet, endearing, warm-n-fuzzy Now, go dance with your demons and try not to destroy the Earth. You are one of my demons. I make you dance.
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I hadn't thought about that. I'll let you all contemplate that and "reach resolve" regarding the song. I'm just glad to see you all treating each other so well. AWWWWWWWWWWW... I like it when you're feeling all sweet, endearing, warm-n-fuzzy Now, go dance with your demons and try not to destroy the Earth. You are one of my demons. I make you dance. Lol... Yeah', it's good to have goals, Mr Lied
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