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Lyrics

[Verse]
Marty was a loner with corkscrew glasses
And Suspenders that were great for pulling
Yeah, he got that alot, started skipping classes
That system didn't seem so appealing
[Pre chorus]
But he did have a knack
For solving puzzles on the back
Of his morning box of corn flakes yeat, he couldn't get enough, started killing for the stuff
Seeking puzzles for much higher stakes
[CHORUS]
He was a cereal killer
Some say he was destined to be
No father to control him
his mother would console him
The evil in his eye she never could see
He was a cereal killer
[Verse repeats]
Well, He whacked some eleven
Fore age twenty seven
Scolars think he preferred natural gas
[Pre chorus repeat]He loaded up on bran
Lift his leg as high as he can
No one ever suspected
It came from his ass
[CHORUS repeats] He was a cereal killer Some say he was destined to be
No father to control him
his mother would console him
The evil in his eye
she never could see He was a cereal killer
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LOL

You and Tony have now sparked and fostered an atmosphere that you can feed off of.
And on cue, you come here, with the help of no one else and post something that proves how dumb you are.

And btw, my vision is 20/20 in one eye and 20/25 in the other. I only wear readers.

Great song.

Btw,

In addition to the highly intelligent, flattering and incredibly imaginative bit of song crafting here, I would like to thank both you and Tony for volunteering here that you had both been blocked out of another website. I put up a song there and I think that I have gotten 4 or 5 comments on it. The atmosphere is pleasant and tranquil. Someone sent me a nice welcoming note and said that that they had seen my songs on other platforms and liked them.

Best of all...per your own accounts...you all are not allowed to post there. If true, you can't turn it to chaos and then feed on it.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Which of your songs did they like. Say wut?

Look around here or any site for clues, talent is not revered,

Yiu got ben suddenly critiquing lyrics cause a female posted them, everybody else...sounds good man


And John showed up too. THATS what's wrong with songwriting sites.

Has nothing to do with good songwriting.

You suck everywhere you go, it's just a matter how much bullshite u wanna believe.

You couldn't write anything close to this, comedic or not yiu hack

Please go there

What is the takeaway there?

oh boy

[naughty word removed] that first version, this is it right here.

One of the best I've done, comedic and all


https://www.udio.com/songs/r41miHwey5WCE4AfhsXynH

Lyrics
[Verse] Marty was a loner with corkscrew glasses
And Suspenders that were great for pulling
Yeah, he got that alot, started skipping classes
That system didn't seem so fulfilling
Pre chorus]
But he did have a knack
For solving puzzles on the back
Of his morning box of corn flakes
yeah he couldn't get enough, started killing for the stuff
Seeking puzzles for much higher stakes
[CHORUS]
He was a cereal killer
Some say he was destined to be
No father to control him
his mother would console him
The evil in his eye she never could see
He was a cereal killer
[Verse repeats]
He whacked some eleven
Fore age twenty seven
Scolars think he preferred the natural gas
He loaded up on bran
Lift his leg as high as he can
No one suspected
It came from his ass
[Pre chorus repeats] yes, he did have a knack
For solving puzzles on the back
Of his morning box of corn flakes
he couldn't get enough, started killing for the stuff
Seeking puzzles for much higher stakes [CHORUS Repeats] He was a cereal killer Some say he was destined to be No father to control him his mother would console him The evil in his eye she never could see He was a cereal killer
[Bridge] Then One night he held up a shop rite
"Give me every box you got"
When an over bloated zealot screamed "they mine" Before he shot..

[Spoken word] Cereal killer lay dead on the floor "Maintenance, bring a mop to aisle four"
[Pre chorus repeats] yes, he did have a knack
For solving puzzles on the back Of his morning box of corn flakes
he couldn't get enough, started killing for the stuff
Seeking puzzles for much higher stakes [CHORUS Repeats] He was a cereal killer Some say he was destined to be No father to control him his mother would console him The evil in his eye she never could see He was a cereal killer
He was a cereal killer

Excellent song.
I completely agree that it truly is one of your best.
More proof of your masterful craftsmanship.
Keep up the great work.

Say wut?

Marty learn how to write or get the he'll off this site, you bring the bar down

What say you Counsel?

I rest my case on the presented evidence Your Honour.

Appropriately named