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But I totally revamped bths music in this, very happy with it.


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She sings "Blowin in the Wind"
in a subway station
Queen Jane Approximately a quarter to four
by five o'clock she wants to shop
heads to her favorite department store

Now, she darts through downtown Baltimore
plenty of time, but don't be late
it's a typical Friday night for her
She's got a typical Friday date

Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates
That's what she's all about
if the rest of Maryland should cease
she wouldn't scream and shout
cause in her eyes, there's no surprise
so far nothing duplicates
ole Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and her Baltimore Dates

Now she's "like a rolling stone"
or a tambourine man's girl
but she's positvely fourth street
in the economic world

Her old man, he was the real estate king
and he left her lots of dough
here she shops again at Bloomingdales
bought some shiny gift for Joe

Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and Baltimore Dates
That's what she's all about
if the rest of Maryland should cease
she wouldn't scream and shout
cause in her eyes, there's no surprise
so far nothing duplicates
ole Bob Dylan, Bloomingdales and her Baltimore Dates

But it ain't me Babe, no no no
It ain't me she's looking for....babe

Slightly retouched again.

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Still unsure how I wrote this.

Was working on my craft learning about alliteration. That title came out of nowhere.

And I remember writing in one sitting. Prolly 15 minutes at the kitchen table.

Set it to music years later , a folk version, to me this is how the byrds would cover it if it were Dylan's song.

Sounds good ,all old songwriters and young love Dylan and are at awe of his genius

How I came to this arrangement.

I first had a dirgy, version folk song, was good I thought, but wasn't exciting.

I was accused of not sharing prompts... So...

If I said a song like Bob Dylan...it would be flagged.

I got creative...

I said this is a song ABOUT somebody who loves Bob Dylan. Let ai do its own math

But I wanted pop rock, added that to prompt.

Then the byrds were famous for doing Dylan songs in a folk pop rock, kind of way...signature sounds were the Rickenbacker electric guitar .

Added that to the prompt, finally said male vocal, with harmonies, modern sounding, radio friendly rock song.


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