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Funny how I better his work in minutes. This says it all.

Yes messengers, it's about Marty

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15097313

There Once Was A Hack
A tired old sack on the crack
Attention from the pack was his favorite snack
Thought he could write just a wanna be, jack

There Once Was A Hack glasses dark black
No musical bone in his scrawny back
His talent so lack brain full of plaque
No matter the subject a boring ole sack

" I want it this way, no that way
No this way and back"
All must obey cause I'm king of the whacks

this way, no that way
No this way and back
All must obey cause I'm king of the whacks

This is just a shortened mimicry of my song.
You have now mimicked the last two songs that I have put up.
You are a stalker.
Mimicry is just imitation of something else.

And there is no bite in these lyrics, just a handful of tired and predictable cliches with SUNO providing the music.

As I said before...if you are going to imitate me, do better than this.

And saying that you did better, is not actually doing better. That is just "bumpin gums."

He say he great, he blow and he blow.
But stuff he put up, aint nothing to show.
He hold up a turd like it diamond that glow.
But everybody know, he can't pass go.

Marty

Must make you feel as the song says, like a hack.


It IS better, i take your poor meter, poor structure, which you are not able to get a consistent flow because your lack of talent prevents you.

You end up forcing lines to fit, use the same content in every verse, no new information.

And write like a 9 year old, I wrote better songs than you when I knew three chords first month of playing guitar.

Lyrically and musically it's no contest hacky

Dom

Saying this doesn't make it true. Never has. It's just "bumpin gums."
Insults is all that you have. Nothing that you have ever put up backs them up.

As I said, it is you who is imitating what I do. Not visa-versa.
if you are going to imitate me...do better than you have... if possible.

Here is the original....
https://suno.com/s/OOq4USeLcvKnyOli

I have done it better, do you understand English?

Saying it doesnt make it true.

Here is the original...

https://suno.com/s/OOq4USeLcvKnyOli

Saying it's not doesn't make it true either.

Look at your catalogue of songs they are all equally bad . Lyrically you have no depth, nothing to say, just trying to stretch words across a paper.

Stop looking for you equally poor wanna be hacks to agree with you.

Here you are posting ai songs when you argued against them and attacked anyone using them.

Now your entering some of the worst lyrics ever posted on a site and thinking your songs are good

Dom

You have imitated two of my songs, claiming to have one-upped them.

One commenter said that my song was "great."
Another said that my song was "brilliant." Even though grateful, I said that might be undeserved praise.
And another poster (YOU) is IMITATING ME! on the last two songs that I have put up.

You can't claim any of those things.
You just hurl insults, because you have nothing else.

Don't personify the song. Don't be "A TROLL IN A HOLE."

My songs are something else ....every single one is better than your hackness

marty, your 74 years old, write like your nine, still have a school yard mentality....

" Were not scared of you "

Laughable as it is sad

Learn how to write, you wrote one good song in your career.

Dom,

I'm 72.

"Scared of me?"

There is no reason why anyone should be scared of me? That's an odd thing to bring up or state.

And as the song says,

"There once was a troll
Thousand miles away, He act real tuff
But everybody say, he aint really got stuff
Jus’ a pussy cream puff, pretendin’ like he ruff.
Enough, enough"

Don't personify the song, Dom.
Don't be a TROLL IN A HOLE.

Well, I disagree here. Marty's wording was a perfect fit for the genre (Rap) he selected. This here doesn't work. These aren't opera lyrics. I'm not saying they are bad, they just don't go well with the genre you selected.

First of all,this wording sounds like an old white guy trying to be black, but n actuality insulting blacks the way they talk, as if he knows their lingo ,

And thinking say WHUT....spelling like that gives im credibility, but that's what hacks do

Secondly I wrote the lyrics to his rap version just plugged in same lyrics as he switched it over to opera and it's better .

No they aren't opera lyrics, but it sounds pretty funny this way and superior to sir Marty

My rap version crushes his

https://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php/topics/1207191/there-once-was-a-hack.html#Post1207191

I'm afraid that I disagree with your critique Rob.

These lyrics simply demean my age;
"tired old sack" "brain full of plaque"

the usual adolesecent insults about sanity;
"cause I'm king of the whacks"

and a handful of insults, using ancient cliches such as;
"No musical bone in his scrawny back"

There is nothing new or interesting to think about.
No sting here. As was intended.
I regard this as impotent tired stuff that a teenager might come up with.

Marty

2 minutes Marty, looking at your shite did that in two minutes.

Your raps are actually racist and you dint even know it, and if not racist ridiculously pathetic and zero authenticity.

Weak meter, poor structure, no ability to write to a hook, no ability to come up with a hook, no depth, no insight, just somebody saying ok, let me take this shite to suno and see if they can make me look good.

Horrible

Dom,

I believe you Dom. It looks like something that a teenager would do in a couple of minutes.
And now, you have added "racist" to my rap song.

I omitted words and used playful conjugations to make a song fit a genre. That isn't racist.
Trying to make it out to be racist...is racist and race bating.

And I have "zero authenticity?"
yet YOU ARE IMITATING MY SONGS.
Think about how ridiculous that is Dom.

Hacky, find a new hobby

No, I enjoy this one.

Find a new site to troll.

Troll’s only claim to fame
Is callin’ otha people names.

Hacky, there is no point in continuing to write, you have no talent for it.

Save space for people who can.

Meanwhile creating boundaries that all must follow to be here.

You CANT write songs,go away

There's no name calling, you can't write that's all

I can't dunk a basketball, I don't try cause I cant

Oh God.. check please!

This coming from you, who declares that they are going to follow others around a song-site and harass them.
And from you, who declares that what goes on and on this site will be allowed and disallowed BY YOU, because what you object to will not happen "not on my watch."

A troll is this site's watch-dog?

"Troll’s only claim to fame
Is callin’ otha people names."

Not only a hack but a liar. Nobody is following you around. What would be ideal is if you were gone, I promise I won't follow you arround

No Dom. I'm not the liar.
That is why I quote you, because you will change what you have written. The trail is there.

I have asked you more times than I can count to stay out of my posts and ignore me and I will do the same regarding you. You have told me in clear terms that was

"not going to happen on your watch"

and that you would continue to drop in on my threads and posts, and harass me. You have now added imitating my songs as a vehicle for insults.

You are the site's troll.

"Troll’s only claim to fame
Is callin’ otha people names."

Arbitrarily posting a quote from a different topic and therefore a different context, to gain a step on somebody clearly just looking for a fair and honest forum, is reprehensible.

You assume people who may be reading are stupid, or you may think you are just smarter than everyone, but by now , the way you keep changing self imposed rules and regulations, and changing them daily, they know.

Try bird carving, go dominate a bird carving site

Say whut?

Dom,

You know that you told me that you wouldn't lay off no matter I did.
You seem to see my suggestions to ignore each other as a green light to heap on more insults.
You referred to all this as, "being on your watch." and you weren't going to let anything go "on your watch."

Go back and read. It's there. As is all of this.
Read back over what you've written just in this post.
The song and thread was intended to be an insult exclusively for me, as stated in the first post.

"yes messengers, it's about Marty"

Too much is down to re-write it.

You're mistaken, id gladly lay off, make the site more than yourself and Rob b and that ilk, I'd have no issue.

Reality is, you don't care about anyone other than yourself, long as you get a steady back rub from Rob and the rest.

But you will not do that.

Then lay off.
I've told you over and over that this harassment and arguing that you do is killing participation here.
People arent staying away because I'm controlling anything.

They're staying away because of the atmosphere that you insist on creating.
It was improving for a while and then you started trolling again. Here we are.

Stop it, that has proven to not be true over and over again.

Tell ya what, football is starting going to be spending alot of time in the man cave

Let's see how active the site becomes

And messenging people to ask for help, may work short term
Long term I will be correct as usual

Absurd statement.
It's proven to be true for any fool to see, has been for years of decline, and why the site is now, once again, down to you trolling my posts and arguing with me. Only you.

If you care about the site, leave me alone and be cordial to everyone here.
Put up your songs. If no one comments, don't blame me or anyone else, or start making up and blaming villainous cliques.... be nice and put up better songs.

If you don't care about the site, then do what you do.

Not going back and forth.

The site is not active because it's three people kissing each other's ass

Completely unaware that there is a collective eye rolling.

It's been proven over and over again and I'll prove it one final time, then I'd like you to shut up hacky.

It will not be any different than right now, .

It may be a simple misunderstanding if what a good site is.. hint there's no I in it.

But if it does not change while I'm gone, I'll be back to critique your [naughty word removed] songs

Well,

if you are going to stay away for the entirety of football season to prove that the site will see no improvement in engagement with you gone...I think that is a good idea.

Ok, but if it doesn't happen, watch out hacky

You'll get what you give troll.
Need proof? This thread.

Oh this thread huh? Seems it just shows I write better. Nobody else is looking.

I suggest you put your thinking cap on and figure out how to improve the site

Hint it's not kissing three arses.

I'm aware of what would improve the site. I'm working on it.
And I've got some unwitting help.

💩

I've already seen a picture of you that you put up a couple of years ago.

Same guys arguing over stupid shite. This site never changes

Fact,
but it is, at least, appropriately contained to this thread and not spread out through several songs and amongst several posters.
I don't have the authority to make this stop or uninstall the delusion in the minds of those that could, that it is somehow valiant to let it go on and on and on...so I try to draw the fire and sequester it.

QUESTION: What would you say to a middle school teacher who let their class devolve into chaos every day in a misguided and delusional attempt to uphold the 2nd amendment?

It is a two front battle. Uncle Si called it right.

All things considered, things are somewhat better as a result.
Every once in a while you pop up and randomly rag about something, but that occurs within tolerable limits.

Marty

I guess you guys like arguing , Seems exhausting to me

Only happens here Ben.
I come here because I enjoy writing songs and like posting them.
I argue when and after, I am attacked in the process of doing that.
Of late, I do it to draw and sequester fire.

That's no lie.
I belong to multiple sites about, guitars, songwriting, motorcycles, motorcycle travelling, GMC trucks, architecture...and exchange all sorts of helpful info...but only argue on this one, and one other in the past.

It's the moderation.

One FB page dedicated to motorcycle-long-distance-riding had rules that you had to agree to, to be admitted...

"If you want to preach your religion,
go to bible study.

If you want to talk politics,
volunteer for the candidate of your choice

If you want to insult people,
not going to happen here.

If you want to do any of the above here,
don't click the box."

How did this get over 9 thousand views?

My soundclick through the roof.

It's almost as if it becomes obvious who this is about, and it just fits

Uhmm hum...

https://soundclick.com/song/15097313