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Lyrics at link Still Loving You In SilenceI'll put lyrics here too: You vanished slow like dusk from skies No warning in your final breath A flicker fades behind my eyes I’m dancing with your silhouette I trace your name in morning mist The glass remembers where you stood A whispered thought, a ghostly twist Still pulling me through pain and good Still loving you in silence Where the silence cuts like glass Still loving you in silence In the echo of what passed You're the ache inside my laughter The ghost behind my gaze Still loving you in silence Through the quiet, through the haze The stars still hang but drained of fire You took the glow you took the song The wind recalls your lost desire It hums your name all winter long Your shadow drapes the bed at night It clings like cold beneath the sheets I whisper into failing light Where memory and mourning meet Still loving you in silence Where the silence cuts like glass Still loving you in silence In the echo of what passed You're the ache inside my laughter The ghost behind my gaze Still loving you in silence Through the quiet through the haze Love doesn't die when it’s denied It haunts the halls where hope once cried Still loving you in silence Where the silence cuts like glass Still loving you in silence In the echo of what passed You're the ache inside my laughter The ghost behind my gaze Still loving you in silence Through the quiet, through the haze
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Hi Marilyn
Lovely song I particularly loved verse one there's some good libes there and that continued throughout.
Good vocal well done
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hi Marilyn
Lovely song I particularly loved verse one there's some good libes there and that continued throughout.
Good vocal well done
John Thank you, John, for your kind words. 😊🎧
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Lyrics at link Still Loving You In SilenceI'll put lyrics here too: You vanished slow like dusk from skies No warning in your final breath A flicker fades behind my eyes I’m dancing with your silhouette I trace your name in morning mist The glass remembers where you stood A whispered thought, a ghostly twist Still pulling me through pain and good Still loving you in silence Where the silence cuts like glass Still loving you in silence In the echo of what passed You're the ache inside my laughter The ghost behind my gaze Still loving you in silence Through the quiet, through the haze The stars still hang but drained of fire You took the glow you took the song The wind recalls your lost desire It hums your name all winter long Your shadow drapes the bed at night It clings like cold beneath the sheets I whisper into failing light Where memory and mourning meet Still loving you in silence Where the silence cuts like glass Still loving you in silence In the echo of what passed You're the ache inside my laughter The ghost behind my gaze Still loving you in silence Through the quiet through the haze Love doesn't die when it’s denied It haunts the halls where hope once cried Still loving you in silence Where the silence cuts like glass Still loving you in silence In the echo of what passed You're the ache inside my laughter The ghost behind my gaze Still loving you in silence Through the quiet, through the haze This is interesting, not the typical song for radio. The demo is good quality, and the singer sounds convincing, my only objection is it could be viewed as a. Obsessive woman, who is a borderline stalker. If that's the case, it's a good character shot. Other hand, not empowering to somebody going through a breakout. Reminds me of Tori Amos. Good work
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[quote=Marilyn Oakley]
This is interesting, not the typical song for radio. The demo is good quality, and the singer sounds convincing, my only objection is it could be viewed as a. Obsessive woman, who is a borderline stalker.
If that's the case, it's a good character shot.
Other hand, not empowering to somebody going through a breakout.
Reminds me of Tori Amos.
Good work Thank you for your kind words. Yeah, it's more a song for sync. 😊🎧
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Still loving you in silence
Where the silence cuts like glass
Still loving you in silence
In the echo of what passed
You're the ache inside my laughter
The ghost behind my gaze
Still loving you in silence
Through the quiet, through the haze I've been reluctant to comment on this one because "Still Loving You" reminds me too much of the SCORPIONS lol... (big fan) But I can't think of a truly clever way around it... Quietly missing you Your absence cuts like glass Silently needing you In the echo of what passed You're the ache inside my laughter The ghost behind my gaze Solitary mourning Through the quiet, through the haze
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Still loving you in silence
Where the silence cuts like glass
Still loving you in silence
In the echo of what passed
You're the ache inside my laughter
The ghost behind my gaze
Still loving you in silence
Through the quiet, through the haze I've been reluctant to comment on this one because "Still Loving You" reminds me too much of the SCORPIONS lol... (big fan) But I can't think of a truly clever way around it... Quietly missing you Your absence cuts like glass Silently needing you In the echo of what passed You're the ache inside my laughter The ghost behind my gaze Solitary mourning Through the quiet, through the haze Thanks, Japov, appreciate your comments and kind words. Love the Scorpions too. Seen them in concert many moons ago. LOL
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