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This is the first song I wrote and recorded in my new studio in Florida. New software, new equipment, etc. A lot of new things to learn and I do miss a lot of the old stuff I had been using for years. The sound isn't perfect but I hope my new songs in the future will be better and much easier to record.
I found the lyrics in the lyric section of this site: https://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php/topics/1193479/wasting-my-time.html#Post1193479
They were written by Carroll Kiphen and I found these lines very inspiring. I hope you like the song.

All the best
Robert

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14743114

WASTING MY TIME

Verse
Do you really not know
Must I explain
What the rest of the world can see.

I thought it was obvious
How I feel
I thought you felt the same as me

Pre chorus
Was there a misunderstanding
Was there something I didn’t see
Have I misread your intentions
Mistaken your feelings for me

Chorus
Maybe I’m a fool
Chasing the wind
Maybe I’m wasting my time
If you don’t know how much
I love you
Maybe I’m wasting my time

Verse
Am I spinning my wheels
Going nowhere
Has this all been a waste of my time

Was I a fool to think
You loved me too
Was my heart in love with a lie

Pre chorus

Chorus

Bridge
Has me loving you been a mistake
Another heartbreak for me
Have I been a fool to dream that
You could ever fall for me

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Hey Rob
good song man on production , some BGVS might fill it some more , but its fine as is

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Sounds great! Nice song. More! More!
Bill

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Great job on this song Rob. Production gets better all the time!


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Hi Elvis,
thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. I agree with you regarding the background vocals. I appreciate the feedback.

All the best
Robert

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Hey Bill,
I'm glad you liked the song. Thanks for the feedback. I'm sure more songs will come in the future.

All the best
Robert

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Hey Robert! Well done, sir!

What a wonderful song to break in the new studio! Keep 'em coming!

Peace,

Dave


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Nicely done Robert....good interpretation of the lyric ...some BGV would really move it up a notch or two

Steve


Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.â€...Steven McDonald
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What DAW are you using?


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I like what you did with the chorus... great rhythm/melody.

Every time I hear you sing I want to write something specifically for you... I just haven't figured out what wink

Put Solaria to work!


The journey is definitely more important than the destination...
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Hi Dave,
I agree! Thank you.

All the best
Robert

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Hey Steve,
thanks for commenting. I agree with you and Elvis that background vocals could make a big difference. So far, I haven't come up with something that sounded like it fits. I'll keep playing around with the idea.

All the best
Robert

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Hi Brian,
I've been using Logic since 2012. I'm using that in my new stdio as well.

Take care
Robert

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Hey Tony,
thank you for the feedback. I don't have my AI vocalists here (in Florida) in my new studio. It's kind of like DIY again. I'm not a vocalist but in such a recording the listener gets an idea of how the lyrics can go with the underlying melody.

Take care
Robert

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Originally Posted by Rob B.
Hey Tony,
thank you for the feedback. I don't have my AI vocalists here (in Florida) in my new studio. It's kind of like DIY again. I'm not a vocalist but in such a recording the listener gets an idea of how the lyrics can go with the underlying melody.

Take care
Robert
I disagree...
We just need to figure out what your voice is suited for wink


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It's a pretty good pop melody for sure. And I think you did your best to make a book where there is none.

Wasting my time, the way you are singing the memodysounds much bigger and important than what is being said .

That hook could be ten times stronger with a good lyrical hook on that part

The guitar riff s so obviously U2, and I bet whatever software your using says With or without you, or some reference like that.

Doesn't fit right cause it's not that style.

But it sounds good, And if prefer the real vocals over ai

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Hi Fdem,
I appreciate your feedback. I'm glad you think the song sounds pretty good.
The only software I used on this track was my DAW (Logic) but hearing that it sounds a bit like a big hit is a good thing, I think ...

All the best
Robert

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Originally Posted by Rob B.
Hi Fdem,
I appreciate your feedback. I'm glad you think the song sounds pretty good.
The only software I used on this track was my DAW (Logic) but hearing that it sounds a bit like a big hit is a good thing, I think ...

All the best
Robert

Lol who is playing the guitar? Playing 30 years I know what one sounds like

I'm not dismissing anything, your using a uu33 sample and prolly don't even know it.

And nothing wrong with it

It's ok look at the ai thread music is going through an identity crisis. Wish ud view me as a supporter not an enemy

Listen at 4:00


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Hi Fdem,
I'm sorry, but there is no "real" guitar in my recording. I bought a Yamaha Genos 2 and all the sounds (bass, drums, guitars, etc.) that you hear are selectable in that instrument. It's a keyboard, not a guitar. Must be pretty good if even you didn't recognize the difference. I didn't use any additional software or instruments. I recorded each instrument sound to a different Logic track. The Genos 2 is really awesome. What's a uu33 sample? I actually really would like to view you as a supporter.

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No, I know there's not a real guitar, but there is a guitar sample playing that part . When you said no, I'm like who's playing guitar. it seemed like you got offended that I said it was a U2 sample. I think I typed the name wrong. U2

What I'm saying is the u2 riff doesn't fit that song well but the idea gets across

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Fdem,
I sounded offended??? Where did I sound offended? Well, now you know that what you hear isn’t a real guitar. It’s good that we don’t have to discuss that subject any further.

Honestly, I now do have to admit that I find it very annoying that you apparently know much better how I recorded my song than I do. I’ll explain it one last time… I used a Genos 2 keyboard to record all the instrumental tracks in Logic X. 3 of the 8 instrumental tracks I recorded are guitar tracks. I used a folk guitar sound, a 12-string guitar sound and an e-guitar sound on 3 separate tracks and mixed them appropriately. I used the e-guitar only in the riff. I wish I could have used some of the midi samples like I do every now and then, but my new studio is not completely up and running yet. I did not use midi samples in this recording.

Have a nice day.

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Originally Posted by Rob B.
Fdem,
I sounded offended??? Where did I sound offended? Well, now you know that what you hear isn’t a real guitar. It’s good that we don’t have to discuss that subject any further.

Honestly, I now do have to admit that I find it very annoying that you apparently know much better how I recorded my song than I do. I’ll explain it one last time… I used a Genos 2 keyboard to record all the instrumental tracks in Logic X. 3 of the 8 instrumental tracks I recorded are guitar tracks. I used a folk guitar sound, a 12-string guitar sound and an e-guitar sound on 3 separate tracks and mixed them appropriately. I used the e-guitar only in the riff. I wish I could have used some of the midi samples like I do every now and then, but my new studio is not completely up and running yet. I did not use midi samples in this recording.

Have a nice day.

So I was right you were offended

I simply said that guitar part is a clone of U2.

It doesn't matter how you recorded it, if it's a sample ,whatever argument you wanna bark back with

If you like it that's cool

You can't be told anything. No more input from me again

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Fdem,
no, you are wrong. I wasn't offended by your initial comments. But your continuous claims that i used sampled software was very annoying. It looks like you see everything differently. And, you didn't "simply" say the riff was a U2 clone. You repeatedly claimed I used some kind of sampled software, which I didn't. Now you claim it doesn't matter how I recorded it. Then why make such a fuss of it in the first place?

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LMAO

If you used a sample , or played it on a keyboard, or whatever you used

It doesn't fit the song .

'"claim*'

I hereby present this esteemed claim to the jury lolol lololol

Go head tell everybody here how you did it, they are very intently reading.

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Fdem,
this song has has the proper title to describe this discussion with you: "I'm Wasting My Time".

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Bumped from the sea of red dot kingdom disease...lol.
Bill


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