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Woodsongs
by Gary E. Andrews - 01/23/25 02:18 PM
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Carolina
by E Swartz - 01/23/25 07:17 AM
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Breathe
by Bill Draper - 01/20/25 05:32 PM
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I wrote this as a sort of slap to intransigence. Too much of it out there. But what do I know? https://on.soundcloud.com/EFuatAs far as I know © 2023 Vic Arnold As far as I know, I tried my best Blinded by uncertainty I took the test As far as I roamed, I've never seen a place I needed more than where I've been And all things considered I still bathe in the after glow .... As far as I know. As far as I love, I loved my wife even when her words cut through me like a knife As far as it seems, she still loves me although we're not together like we used to be But all things considered it seemed right to let us go .... As far as I know. Ch. As far as I know I may know nothing. It maybe a dream, but at least it's something, As far as I know Inst. Ch. Outro
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"intransigence..." lol, good word! On the other hand, life simply "is what it is" and you have to live it regardless... I think you put a real fine point on that  Real Sweet, Vic!
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Thanks Japov.
Grumpy I am and grumpy I remain.
Even in sunshine I’m waiting on rain.
Vic
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Vic,
A real nice tune. Loved the melody and your arrangement! (I did have to go look up that word definition however)......
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Hi Ed. Thank you for the comment. BTW, so did I. Vic 
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Nice sentiments Vic. Wives can speak, but usually shout some cutting and acerbic things.
Pleasant ballad
John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Thanks John.
Life is life, eh?
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Sounds good , Grumpy and mean will keep you alive longer
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Vic, are you, like, the fifth Highwaymen? So much grit and self-honesty; as moving as anything Waylon, Willie, Johnny, or damn...EVEN Kris K ever wrote (in my humble opinion). There was always a beautiful transparency to their lyrics, and that's always been a part of who you are, too. Maybe we're a little older and realize there's much less to lose. Bless you, ol' friend. Mike
Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 08/08/23 06:51 PM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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As far as I know....
You make the song work. 100% youre the singer of this song , I think take you out of the picture it's not as good . You want to listen cause it feels sincere .
It might be one of your best and it sounds really good too.
And I love the bridge...
One nit might be that you overuse the as far as I know hook. I know that's a giant part of the song, but I think it might add a bit to counter with a rhymimg line in spots.
I enjoyed listening and it does seem to tell who you are, can't go wrong doin that
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I hope that’s true, Bennash.
Thank you.
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Mike.
I blush at your comments but thanks. Actually I was thinking Waylon at the time of writing.
Good to hear from you and I hope you’re well.
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Thanks Fdem. You rained on my parade, but I forgive you.  I did think myself that I may have overused the hook toward the end. Now that you bring it up I will have a rethink. Thank you. Vic
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Haha no that was a jab at Mike not you lol.
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Poignant, a bit painful and pretty Vic. Enjoyed it...as far as I know.  Marty
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I know but it cut me to the bone.  Vic
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Thanks Marty.
That's all I can ask, afaik.
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Very very deep and emotional it pulls me in as I listen I feel this song and just my opinion I think many people need to hear this song. Thanks for sharing Vicarn
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Hi Irwin.
Thanks very much.
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Vic,
this is awesome. It's so full of emotion. Listening gave me goosebumps.
All the best - Robert
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It's simple and honest and feels heartfelt. Most great songs start that way. I love the melody and the little guitar breaks add interest. Very good delivery too. It's very moving. One of my faves of yours.
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This is all I'm asking for .
If your gonna go basic and bare, put your heart in it.
Liked it when I heard it, still do
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