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Rain
by bennash - 12/12/24 07:38 PM
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Curtis
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/12/24 07:05 PM
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Icehouse
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/12/24 06:53 PM
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Janita
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/11/24 08:26 PM
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El Lopo
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/09/24 11:18 AM
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Hi, I'm looking for feedback on this song before I start pitching to Artists. I wrote the lyrics and Rayna wrote the melody. I'm going to target Southern Gospel and Inspirational Country groups. "When I Pray" Listen to "When I Pray" (Ft Rayna) by Darin Martin on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/WBQcFWhen I Pray Words and music (c) 2023 Darin Martin & Rayna Carlock (V1) When I'm lost, when I'm feeling down I know I need a little help to get me through the day I talk to God so He can turn my life around I just feel better when I pray (Chorus) When I pray God listens to what I have to say I can see God work in mysterious ways When I bow my head the devil runs away I just feel better when I pray (V2) When I'm sad, when I've got the blues He knows what’s on my heart when I don’t know what to say When I doubt God knows what I'm going through I just feel better when I pray (Repeat Chorus) (Bridge) I put my trust in Jesus now He’s my dearest friend If you believe it, can I get an amen? (Repeat Chorus)
Last edited by dtrainddog; 05/21/23 07:25 PM.
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Three chords and the Truth! 
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Good luck with the pitching and keep us apprised.!
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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You say a lot with a simple lyric, which, IMHO is good writing,,,using the guitar was perfect to create the feel...put a full orchestration to this and I'm hearing an old time revival happening....nicely done Darin
Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald
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Its a simple lyric , You're piching to publishers ? Sounds good , A killer demo would put it over the top
good luck with it
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