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Breathe
by Bill Draper - 01/20/25 05:32 PM
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Gimme' the usual, and add one of those little apple pies  https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14565908I don't want your money I don't do it for fame I don't even need to know You ever knew my name I just need this moment To break you from the game And realize that from God's eyes We are all the same From debutantes to paupers Moguls to the meek Athletes and grand elite To the frail and the weak From the rich to the poor We have one thing in common Your status doesn't matter From the inside of a coffin From the miracle of birth To pomp and circumstance Or humble cold beginnings And living just by chance Life is far too short To forget how to pray Since all men will stand equal On judgment day Oh, you can keep your money I don't believe in fame I don't even want to know You ever knew my name Just take a quiet moment Forget about the game And realize that from God's eyes We are all the same
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I think this is your best so far, listened with headphones. Vox up front, cool sound. I like the lyrics reminds me possibly of something from Dylan's "Slow Train Coming" album.
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Enjoying this...
Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 03/24/23 07:28 PM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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Thanks much gentlemen. God only knows where the inspiration comes from 
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Tony I would make a suggestion about your songs, but I don't think that my opinion would be relevant. Your music is highly personalized. You have worked it out using your own processes and methods very thoroughly. The core instrument, which you build around is usually the rock/blues guitar, at which you are soundly competent. Your voice is the sound of Tony. Imho...you have an innate aptitude for combining word phonetics and word meanings. Your art is your art. The only opinion that I have is whether I like it or not. I always do. This one too.
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Way to go Tony Jabroni. I see your sound as Metal more than anything else. I never know what the hell your talking about, but maybe i dont need to.
I like the blues, so not a problem there.
If i posted something like this, everybody would be critiquing the lyric lol. I wish i could write avante garde like that, ive trained myself to write to the hook.
But main thing is you're enjoying it, your vocal is a bit better in this one, there were some off notes, but who cares.
Enjoyed!
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Yes Tony this one moves so nicely ...and your vocals are really good here...like how it builds...and the inspiration comes through quite clearly Bluesy for sure....and I love the follow up....Walking a Little bit Slow........ you changed that up....thank you tnak you thank you
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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"He Is Risen" Jesus is alive and well Ya'll BLESSED EASTER TO EVERYONE
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