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RT .23
by bennash - 05/17/26 03:00 PM
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This just recently occurred to me...  :::UPDATE:::12/07/25 Preliminary midi rough draft; https://soundclick.com/song/15161152Time and expectation My age doesn't suit my mood Anxiety, anticipation But the mountains have never moved The Spirit of the ages Comforts me in stages But wisdom is useless When there's nothing I can do Complaining, debating Heaven's hesitating I'm just waiting The good book says there's a time for rest And there's nothing new under the sun But the hardest test once I've done my best Is accepting that my journey has just begun The Spirit of the ages Colors many stages And reminds me that There's nothing better to do Absolving, redeeming Heaven's contemplating I'm just waiting
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I enjoyed this one and the crazy thing I don't think that I can tell you why. LOL There is just something about it, the music and your vocals; third time around and yes I like it.
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I know what you mean Jerry. I've always felt the same way about "U Can't Touch This" lol... It's just a midi rough, feel free to throw something at it
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IMO ready to finalize...but you know my ears...so a shovelful of salt
Love this as a summation
But the hardest test once I've done my best
Is accepting that my journey has just begun
bd
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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I really like the sound. Great songwriting, as usual. My only crit is aimed at the percussions...........they seem off and hectic ;-)
Besides that (and it's probably just me) this is stellar!!
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HA! You're right actually... I'm not even playing the bass. As a midi "rough draft" I just picked a beat and rolled with it lol
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You write well Tony. imho
This one seems more melodic than usual. Enjoyed the way that it drifts.
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Yeah', sometimes they just write themselves... Thanks Marty
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Man, you got that tight punchy thing down, and like the drums right up front and driving.....right in my wheelhouse!!
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Man, you got that tight punchy thing down, and like the drums right up front and driving.....right in my wheelhouse!! Speaking of strangers... :::UPDATE::: https://soundclick.com/song/15161152
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Sounds good man , Good production you crazy christian
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.
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Sounds good man , Good production you crazy christian HA! Thanx 
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...any feedback would be really fun!
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Promote it on Youtube , ya never know who's listening, Banners about 10 bucks on Fiverr. You could study how to make vids and promote, if you can figure out logic , you can figure out that https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXvPS3XP6d9a0EruAyxlv_gYou could make one like that pretty easy
Last edited by bennash; 12/16/25 12:39 AM.
We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
Different roads, but the same means.
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