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This is the stuff we’re made of https://drive.google.com/file/d/1sMrcXuR1bNLgPa5JuPzTma74Fsrluucw/view?usp=drivesdkThe Stuff We’re Made Of (Tracy Richardson, Craig Kuchler) 1.8.22 Vs:1 There’s a jar on the checkout counter At the hometown grocery store Needing our dimes and quarters Dollar bills and more For the local homeless shelter The ones who are down and out Everyone adds a couple coins So no one goes without chorus We are strong when we’re together We are weak when we’re apart At our worst when we…are selfish At our best with open hearts (We’re) a coat of many colors Like Dolly’s mama made with love This is the stuff, this is the stuff we’re made of Vs:2 When tornados tear through towns In the middle of the night fires rage through neighborhoods And burn til morning light Everybody comes to help From across the USA Binging food and blankets Joining hands to pray chorus We are strong when we’re together We are weak when we’re apart At our worst when we…are selfish At our best with open hearts (We’re) a coat of many colors Like Dolly’s mama made with love This is the stuff we’re made of Bridge: We’re denim and satin We’re leather and lace When we’re sewn together It’s a beautiful thing Chorus: We are strong when we’re together We are weak when we’re apart At our worst when we…are selfish At our best with open hearts (We’re) a coat of many colors Like Dolly’s mama made with love This is the stuff we’re made of This is the stuff This is the stuff we’re made of Copyright 2022 T Richardson/C
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Great Lyric! Google is being a pain as usual though... I think you need to give permission for anyone with the link to access the file...
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I would like to hear a demo of this. The lyrics seems to be nicely phrased.
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Try again guys I forgot to change access. Take a listen.
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Try again JAPOV and Tom.
Last edited by CTthomas; 07/27/22 09:21 PM.
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Sorry, I don't trust Google. It won't play and I'm not going to download... You should try Windows OneDrive
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DropBox Works! I like the piano treatment. This definitely deserves a "fuller" mix! Perhaps some harmony vox? Very nice start here
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I agree with JAPOV. Great lyric with an important message and the worktape suggests this will be a really good song, with a strong affecting melody already in place.
If I had one suggestion, it would be to make the bridge (which I really like) rhyme or near-rhyme. I'm old fashioned in liking rhyme, but I think I probably have that in common with most listeners. Maybe something like... We’re denim and satin We’re leather and lace When we’re sewn together What beauty we create
Just a thought. It's really good as it is.
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Thanks Gavin. Appreciate the input from you and JAPOV.
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