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Great vocal....the harmonies in the chorus blow the top off the roof of this fine song...powerful hook here.
Steve
ps I signed up for SongU ...lite... thanks for the tip
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”
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Great vocal....the harmonies in the chorus blow the top off the roof of this fine song...powerful hook here.
Steve
ps I signed up for SongU ...lite... thanks for the tip Thank you, Steve. You are very welcome and wish you all my best at SongU in your new venture.
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Love it....great beat, lyric, music, vocal,,,,top notch
Do have one niggly with the way "shotGUN' is rushed... wanted to hear SHOTgun so the gun could run a little more...but who am I to argue with such a fine piece of work?
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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Great song with a powerful vibe. Excellent production as well.
You really deliver on the vocals. Nicely done.
My only nit is that the vocals in the verses are too far out front. They sit just right in the chorus. You want a lift in the chorus, and with the verse vocals so 'in-your-face' it is watering down the punch of the chorus. There is also a resonance in the "air" on the vocals that sticks it's head up a bit too far. A little whack-a-mole on this resonant frequency is advised :P/
Overall, fantastic!
Peace, TC
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Love it....great beat, lyric, music, vocal,,,,top notch
Do have one niggly with the way "shotGUN' is rushed... wanted to hear SHOTgun so the gun could run a little more...but who am I to argue with such a fine piece of work?
Thank you, John.
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Great song with a powerful vibe. Excellent production as well.
You really deliver on the vocals. Nicely done.
My only nit is that the vocals in the verses are too far out front. They sit just right in the chorus. You want a lift in the chorus, and with the verse vocals so 'in-your-face' it is watering down the punch of the chorus. There is also a resonance in the "air" on the vocals that sticks it's head up a bit too far. A little whack-a-mole on this resonant frequency is advised :P/
Overall, fantastic!
Peace, TC Thank you, TC.
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