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Afro Pop
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/01/26 12:39 PM
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Afro Pop
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/01/26 12:38 PM
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Gone
by Michael W. Brown - 09/30/26 07:17 PM
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Mara Cole
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/30/26 01:32 PM
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well...I like the other two I have read of yours so far but this one confused me....
now one thing...try and put more punctuation in...I don't get mine exact and perfect either but some words unpunctuated are other words...
and some of the words you do use in this...I don't think you got the right form of them...they don't make sense...just kinda like you threw a noun in where you meant to put an adjective...or whatever...
anyway just work on it and I will read it again if you update and give you another critique....keep writing
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