Hey Susie,
Tweaks below, keep or sweep smile
V1:
I hear the rushing rain against my window.
It wakes me from a memory.
Remembering our starlit night
And the soothing music of the sea.

I wish I could hear your calming voice once more
Saying I will be alright.
Hear your footsteps cross the floor,
Feel you hold me in the night.

Pre Chorus:
I'm going crazy missing you.
and I don't know what to do. <<--(Look for a fresher way to say these lines)
I know I wouldn't feel alone
if only heaven had a phone.

Chorus: Too long IMO
If only heaven had a phone
[color:#000099]I'd call you one more time
to say how much I love you
and how I'm glad that you are mine.

I would tell you I am sorry
for any words that caused you pain
and if I could I would move hell and earth
Just to have you back again.

No. I wouldn't feel so alone
if only heaven had a phone.[/color]
V2:
The clock reminds me that it's morning.
Time to face another day.
I'll place one foot before the other
After I kneel down and pray.

Ask God to tell you that I miss you.
That I'll Tryin' to make it on my own.
I would tell you this and more
if only heaven had a phone.


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