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I thought this was interesting...I can't find the rhyme scheme in the verses, but it doesn't matter as much as you would think it does because it does have a certain flow about it. I didn't get the part about liver and onions at Shoney's, though? I feel like this needs another layer of something, but not sure what to suggest. I wish you well with it.
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