Hey Neil,
Enjoyed the story!
Tweaks below, keep or sweep smile

It was 2 years later when I next saw Stan again
No four-legged partner, he had a lady friend
Randy’s guide-dog nature had led Stan right to Jane
His best friend knew it was time for change



“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard

Co-writing = Compromise!