Pam, Dottie, Jan and John - Thanks very much guys for checking out the tune. My main composition question about this tune is whether the B section is strong enough? (The loud section about 1/3 of the way thru) and if it should be repeated? The form of this is basically ABA with a lot of A. Apparently it doesn't bug you guys too much?

Peace,

Ian


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