Scott,

I like it. I am sure she likes it too.

As far as arrangement goes, I hear long drawn out bass notes and a string section coming in on the first note of the second verse. Maybe drums coming in on the second chorus. A fiddle on the bridge (think Eleanor Rigby tones), and maybe solo piano to the end. I don't really think harmony vocals would work with the lyrical theme.


Colin

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