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Riot Fest
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/21/26 10:51 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 06/19/26 06:43 PM
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Hey there Douglas.......
-I think the "Bible Belt" concept is a jewel of an idea.....not too many ideas out there are original....just lots of spinning on old (re)hash. For that, I really applaud you.
-The story is thin,unto itself. I thought of two angles to the "Bible Belt" before I started listening. You got the "hanging" thought. There is also the "spanking" aspect you can delv into. And there are probably more to ponder as food for thought. I alos found the lyric to be really negative..a little too negative.
-The melody is just fine...with a solid story in your lyric it could become Dylan-esc.
I think you have a grand first draft....and again, you've got the hardest element of a song to obtain--- originality!!
-Tom
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