Hi, Douglas.. over in the lyric forum, someone commented that you hadn't utilized the "other" meaning of Bible belt.. I assumed they were referring to the geographic bible belt here in the U.S.

I kind of kept expecting you to build that into the song and give it meaning in that direction, and I thought it was a good idea.

I think the twist this one needs is the contrast between the geographic Bible belt and what it stands for, compared to Daddy, whose bible belt is the direct opposite. In order to accomplish that, you'll have to paint Daddy as the loathsome man you're attempting here. BUT, you will have to make the followers of the geographic Bible belt a little more likeable. IMO, you have made the churchgoers almost as ugly as Daddy, because you've painted them as gossiping judgemental folks (hypocrites) who just look for the bad in others, and I don't feel that is accurate.

Hope that helps some!

--Jen

Last edited by Jen Warner; 08/12/11 02:05 AM.
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