Hi

The second version is the BETTER one. I almost wanted it to not even go in that direction with that beat,as it was making for a very lovely theater or movie sound track type song. Ya know "Titanic"
That beat gave it more of an Ace Of Base (older late 90's pop group) or typical type pop vibe which is fine. But the song is more dynamic, melodic, musical more natural and more appealing in the second version.

The first track is closer to radio, but still would be a tough bet to compete with the likes of Gaga or a Beyonce.

All the best



Thanks!
Peace Mike
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