Originally Posted by TamsNumber4
This is my 60th song on SoundClick that I have posted in my 14 months of songwriting and I would like to celebrate with a little music!! Please??


So Tammy, it's your 'Diamond' anniversary.. congrats

Seriously, I like what you have done here although 1 line does not work for me at all.

'left bruised and battered by waves of ache'

Just dosn't seem to be gramatically correct Tammy.

maybe a suggestion KOS

looking for a place to keep me safe
somewhere on your shore
Cos I’m feeling deep hurting ache
I haven’t felt before

Maybe it's me though.

Anyway I do like it and will follow your progress

God Bless Roy and Helen

Last edited by Roy Cooper; 04/08/11 09:26 AM.

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