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Hello Petar (where does the 'a' come from?),
I enjoyed it a lot. It actually reads like Wilhelm Busch, and I could envision it sung in the stile of Reinhard Mey. Cool rhyming structure in the verses: AAB CCCB. Probably needs some tempo to function well. I can hear it in my mind while reading the text - always a good sign :-)
Bernd
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