Hi Ricki. I remember this when it was in the lyric only stage. The choice of blues is working with this lyric. I not getting enough dramatic changes in level on this though. I think the demo does communicate an upswing in the bridge but doesn't quite nail the last verse. In L2, I think "YOU" needs the rise and hold. And you need a dramatic pause on the last line. Otherwise I think most performers will get the flavor of this song.