Hi Glynda,

Thank you for checking this out and for your kind words as always:)


Hi Brian,

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts, I appreciate it!


Hi Mark, Welcome!

KOS=keep or sweep:)

I never thought of it as folk, I figured it was too dark for that but I guess it could be.

V1:
The sweet breath of redemption's
Washed across the bloody bay

What I meant was the damage has been done; it's too late to be cleared from the blame. I don't know maybe there's a better way to say that.

In this line;
Soldiers hopes are drying-should have been dying, I changed it. I had another line there, the blood was drying but it was too close to one of the other lines. I just forgot to drop the r.

I actually wrote most of this in a few minutes one morning as a poem and decided to try to make it into a song.

It's very nice to meet you and thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me!

Dottie

http://www.reverbnation.com/dottiecorley...nue&kick=524819